a no beat rap just straight up by its self hit me back with lots of feed back,
 

i said no beat to it but if i had to i would put it to jesus walks but a lighter undertone , hit me back with wut i should put it to,

she fell into open arms
and got her wings from a man on the street
she walked down the stairs
and never looked behind her
after all that
she dosent know what she wants anymore
she told me she'd walk
as far as the sun took her
and i'm still into her
but she wont know it
so we'll keep it a secret
and i'll wait , and i'll wait
to finally say nothing at all
she got her smile from her mother
and never used it
she lost her self in the movies
but she never would head for the door
or the easy ending
and no matter what they would say
she would just walk off
shes gorgeous to the point
where i cant take anymore
and theres nothing like
the music she makes
when she speaks
shes all around down in the hole
and she would just stand there
but the best move she ever made
was never gettin involved with me
when she was young
she was told stories
never to trust
because it will only end up
in the bottom line
of some song
she fell into open arms
and got her wings from a man on the street
she walked down the stairs
and never looked behind her
after all that
she dosent know what she wants anymore
she told me she'd walk
as far as the sun took her
and i'm still into her
but she wont know it
so we'll keep it a secret
and i'll wait , and i'll wait
to finally say nothing at all

meh....it was ight

uhh this is a poetry section not acapella freestyles

but w/e

well u should return tha favor and gimme some feed back on my poems:
"you pain is my pain" and "turn for tha worse"