droppin something from a little spar today...
 

Everyone gather close so I can show ya how to rhyme
And with enough time I’ll teach ya something so sublime
Your rap sounds like a pantomime, and trust it aint a dime
I wouldn’t give ya a nickel for that weak sh*t
“if the words don’t fit than ya must acquit.”
That wouldn’t be a hit if from biggie himself it was spit
Your raps are in the pit and mine are at the peak
Your lines are weak and my flows unique
With a boatful of words, its like you sprung a leak
I am bout finished with my rap ABCs
So take your keys, and please, go seize some green trees
So next time I listen to that sh*t I am more at ease.

this is like my first stuff so hit me back with good and bad...

word,
kLyMaXXX

I dunno, dog. Your rhymes are pretty basic, like you spit one line and then you'll say anything to make it fit. Like, you need to know where you're going before hand.

But, good first post.

part from u think your the best its iight

like da first guy said ur rhyme was basic n comin in im da best attitude aint gonna get u no where

yea da rym was koo n u amde yo shit work, but u cant have yo first post sayin u da best n shit, shit wont fly, but it was a good first post, n welcome here dawg

sorry y'all...i didnt mean do come out all "i am the best" like that..that was something i actually freestyled earlier in the say against a friend of mine for fun..trust, i know i ain't any good especially compared to most of y'all...sorry bout settin off on the wrong foot...and thanks for the feedback


word,
klymaxxx

np dawg kep postin doe n check out my collabos wit Raw Killa here on da open mic iite dawg 1 love