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kURSe 08-05-04 03:05 AM

sup
 
Kurse

today i was sitting at school actin' a fucking fool,
some niggas run up on me with a muthafucking tool,
pushed dem niggas in the cold school pool,
them niggaz thort they was soo cool,
some even say my verses will make u drool,

today i delt with a no-good snitch,
this punk muthafucker was a stank ass bitch,
puched him in tha face but there was a hitch,
the nigga turned around and threw his fucking fist,
got a grip on his head and gave a twist

all i heard was snap,
his niggas started fucking pullin gats,
but they were all little young cats,
i reached for my strap,
to blow this muthafucker back,

shot em with a 357 slug,
turned them all into itty bitty bugs,
stop with the kisses and hugs,

cause i got no love for stank ass hoes,
just like snoop said in 1994,
all u hoes just wants my doe,
and dont think im fucking slow,

see i sell gats of the mutha fucking shelf rack,
to keep all my niggaz strap,
only if u got the guts to pull the hammer back,
all u niggaz on planet is slack,
and all your fucking rhymes are wack
just like crojack when he wasn't black

never leave your crib without a vest
nigga, have u tooken a slug to the chest
my slugs are hollow point rip through your fucking vest
this verse was dedicated to u niggas who thought you was the best
dont forget tonight at 12:00 theres anal fest


was that shit wack?

FRom Kurse
(i aint never rehearse)

kURSe 08-05-04 04:32 AM

write some comments come on even u haters tell me what u think so i can make it better

kURSe 08-05-04 04:52 AM

some one post please

Introspect. 08-05-04 04:54 AM

it was ..........................wack no vocab structure was awful eh

Introspect. 08-05-04 04:55 AM

^^speaks tha truth..................*nuff said*.....................

kURSe 08-05-04 04:56 AM

yeh man thats cool ty for sayin

Introspect. 08-05-04 04:58 AM

just work on betta vocab and fix ya structure up

kURSe 08-05-04 05:09 AM

teach me :)

raw killa 08-05-04 05:29 AM

virute couldnt teach ya shit nigga jus bitches bout people's verse's n shit jus work on ur vocab n punches,multi's,meta's,structure...i suggest u buy a dictionary read it...a theasaurus read it n a rhyme book....read it jus keep practicin n u b betta
4get my stats in battles certain niggaz n niggets kno i got skillz fuck da hataz bro peace nigga

kURSe 08-05-04 05:34 AM

ty man

EmerginMc07 08-05-04 09:35 AM

yea vocab seriosuly needs to get betta jus look up all dese words n try rymin them n ull get betta, n fuck Virtue he aint on shit, but yea u jus keep doin yo shit n keep postin n ull start seein improvements


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