SONIC vs Ice Pick
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 08-08-04 at 09:56 AM

Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in.

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 09:56 AM.

SONIC has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 09:58 AM.

Visional "SONIC"? Ha, I'll give yu some "adivce"... Kiss my left cheak...
My disses so "far ahead of ya tyme" itz like i ripped you "last week"...
dont bring tha "beef" to me cause dogg i "spoil it",
You keep "slippin on ya tounge" like tha it was an "oil slick"...
Sonic talks so much "shit", hiz "mouth could clogg my toilet".
I leave yu passed out cause ya verse iz "ass out" like a "jay lo porn"...
Say no more, I must be "Neutering dis homo", cause i leave his "gay flow torn"...
Ya "abandoned" stylez like an "orphan", Son nobody "cares bout you"...
Tha heat of this verse is only a portion, my real verse would ruin ya whole crew...
Only problem im havin in dis battle is deciding how many ribs ta shift...
You dissin me??? Might as well "call me constapated" cause "i dont give a shit"....

You gonna drop soon
time is running out on ya
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Yo rhymes are like dull Magnets, It ain't Attractive
I'm Ill while You're just "Sick"... Sick of Sayin Whack Shit
I Spit the right shit, Stay on u and come for blood Like Ticks
Flow Tight like Vice Grips, rhymes "sharper" than any "Ice Pick"
Aim precise, hit you with more Accuracy than Tactical Archers
U only win against Newbs, it's like Soldiers Attackin da Farmers
No Fair, that's why yo wack shit is goin No Where
In person U "Choke" on mics, Like the atmosphere had No Air
So there bitch, you'll need some Aid Just to Stop Me
Coz u couldn't give me a "Sick Punch" if u had Aids n U Socked Me

Nice u got it up in time

Sharper than any ice pick , DAMN I GOTTA CHANGE MY NAME OR SUM SHIT

50 times ive herd that so far

ofdido

This was feedback posted for Ice Pick
 

I like the pic you painted, it was koo
structure: Icepick
flow" Icepick
harder punches ice pick



return fav to me vs ghost

VOtes please

Feedback is good as long as it has votes with it

STUCTURE! ARE YOU FUCKIN CRAZY, NO OFFENSE, BUT HIS STUCTURE WAS NO WHERE NEAR GREAT.. I DON'T KNOW ABOUT THE PUNCHES BUT STUCTURE? I CAN'T CALL IT DICK RIDE COZ HE DIDN'T VOTE BUT DAMN..

Dick Ryde

I Have A Battle Going Against Him Right Now

So Why Would He Dick Ryde

Notice I Said Vote And Leave Ya Vote

Explain Ya Votes Bttere As Well

I Hate Newbish Votes

Voted For: SONIC

Icepick- Wordplay Was Ok, Some Parts Played, Flow Was Decent, And Punches Connected...

Sonic- Begging Line Was Good, Flow Was Good, And Punches Hit, Also Structure Was Better...

Punches- Sonic
Personals- Tie
Flow-Tie
Wordplay- Icepick
Metaphors-Tie
Structure- Sonic
Originality- Tie....

Final Vote----- Sonic.....

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Sonic

Dont Cry About The Structre Its Like That Because The Lines Wouldnt Fit

But They Did Befor I Posted It

Kronuz You Ar A Fag< Always Voting Against Me

Wanna Battle You No Dick Bitch

It wasn't that, it's just that, I don't see how he could of said that your stucture was better, that's all..