Sinner vs J2theG
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6 - 16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-05-04 at 01:59 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
Sinner has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 01:30 PM.
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J2theG has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 01:54 PM.
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now how can this chump here be a fuckin artist
when I found out his whole famly are retardists serously what percessed you to pick such a name it's really gay J2theG now people isn't dat just lame you think your da best rapper thinking your eminem you really stink and act adult when your a infent I bet your an ugly mutha fucker n ur mums a hooker I bet you got da looks of your mum dats a bad looker sorry did I offend you good! it was all done intentional I don't care i'm trying to piss you off cuz your un cool you have no crew so u know people gona shit on you my crew will waste you and make you get ur mum abused it's sickning how you would want............ to battle me cause your gonna take this personally your not adultry i'll have you this bitch beaten, and then nailed crusified blow up your famly with nukes and make ur friends terified |
u call urself sinner, haha shit please
i bet u at church every day down on ur knees a motha fuking choire boy sukin off the vicar u cant mess wid me, nobody's fukin slicker comin challengin me? hu u fukin fink u r? watch out wen ma windows r down on ma car im the master motha fuker, the ruler of the game everyones gona kno me, no one knows ur name face it boi, just quit while ur head carry on like this u gon whind up dead so dont bother spittin bak bitch, u kno u gon loose i aint kiddin, u do, yo gon pay ur dues |
upping this shit..................................
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Voted For: Sinner
Sinner takes this battle. He had some good vocab and a good structure ta go with it. He got J on the punches too. Nice structure and flow. It really flowed nicely and appealed ta me as the reader. J came kinda weak. Elevate. Good structures on both sides but Sinner takes this. Vote - Sinner Vote on this: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137099 |
This was feedback posted for Sinner
Postin some feedback, too weak of a battle for me to vote on...both of your drops were weak with no good punches and made up personals...if your gonna make an attack at his character get your facts straight, you both need to elevate a lot..but at least you guys are both newbs so this battles good practice...no hatin just keep on elevatin..use multis n metas n your battles and try to use some wordplay too
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Voted For: Sinner
uh yo dis shit was kinda close but both yall cud elevate sum, but uh structure-uh tie flo-sinna punches-well there werent alot but Sinna had some vocab-sinna wordplay-sinna yo man goodbattle yall return da favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140117 iite, v/sinna Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Emergin, why dont you learn how to vote right...every one of your votes i see has inadequate feedback...i know you just joined a month ago, but damn...are you slow or just retarded?
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yo yo appriciate ur feed bak yo. man i agree, i didnt perform well on dat shit. it was a bad battle, i just got 2 distracted. yo sinner i want anutha match sumtime yo.
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Voted For: J2theG
they was both good, both had flow both had rhyme but JstheG's made me laugh "a motha fuking choire boy sukin off the vicar" lol , Sinner yours was good 2 but i just wasent feeling it as much |
yo man do i gota put a fukin parapragh or a fukin essay to explain myt ote fuck wat else do i gota say? shit man my fault yall fukin votin system
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