Tookute4u vs lilchiofthachi
 

Battle Rules:

10-15 lines
no d/r
no crew
no hate
no feedin

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-08-04 at 03:23 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

lilchiofthachi has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 03:24 PM.

Tookute4u has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 03:24 PM.

im too inventive to give you the incentive to battle me
if i cant extract ya brain through the skull i'll do it sabatically
rippin out ya windpipe and flow in it emphatically
so who wants to be the first to test indef????
before you can speak i catch ya breath
snap ya neck and swallow u down till nuthin is left
the emcee cannibal spreadin gas on my lips so i spit flamable
it should be understandable that ~lilchiofthachi~ is nuthin but tangeable
and i still can't be touched everybody was fucked
when it was my mic i clutched undefeatable emcee?? who ever heard of such??
well here it is in the flesh standin the best spittin one word and destroyin ya chest
ill make ya whole flow and begin to molest any dis you had like a mirror it get reflected misdirected
who could ever tear down a flow this complexly architected you have been disected
in two and im not even followin through its pure initial contac
t jus by steppin to me you put ur life on contract interact and ger your vision shifted black
grabbin ur forehead and bendin your head to ya back is it normal to hear this loud of a crack??
this cat is like other fake emcees he's on my jock, and he wants to be me,
someone with your weak style couldn't "Rip" me if i were their favorite "CD"

tookute for who i kno it aint me,
look like u got ya face beat in by Bruce Lee/
u should neva let me in like Young Buck,
imma two step all ova ya face thats how Chitown get crunk/
like tha sig says u aint worthy,thats why when u challenged me i wasnt worryed,cause ur rhymes is fake like ur jewelry/
i neva seen a girl lokk like Dee Bo,ur punchlines is missin like Shaq does a free throw/remeber imma Franchise playa u still on High School level,this war soldier and im tha number 1 rebel

tookute u might win cause i accidentlly put 5 lines instead of ten

i noticed that but its kewl ur good anywaze no hate here

Voted For: Tookute4u

GREAT VOCAB 4U LIKED THA FLOW THA WHOLE THING TIED TOGETHER WELL BUT I DIDNT LIKE THA CLOSER.

U HAD COUPLE BETTA PUNCHES GOOD FLOW BUT I FELT LIKE U AINT PUT ENOUGH IN TO IT.I COULD TELL 4U REALLY WANTED TO WIN I GUESS THATS Y SHE THRU OUT A PRE-WRITTIN VERSE. SHE DIDNT HAVE ONE PERSONEL.SO 4U'S GETTIN IT JUST CUZ VOCAB N CREATIVITY.
GOOD BATTLE

IL TAKE ANY CHALLENGE 4 NIGGAS WHO VOTE ON MY BATTLES
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139514 I GOT LIKE THREE MORE OPEN

I RETURN ALL HONEST VOTES.THAS MY WORD!

Voted For: Tookute4u

open: Both was kinda slow
close: both was alittle weak
personals: ilchiofthachi had none at all, Tookute4u had a few ok ones
metas: both had alright metas
punches: both had ok puncheshTookute4u had more of them


win: Tookute4u

This was feedback posted for lilchiofthachi
 

both these battles sucked ass...wack wack wack

v/nobody

Voted For: Tookute4u

Damn this kid died today
lil that was very unmotivated
simple punches
toocute: much better but i suspect that half the big words u used u dont know the meaning of, no diss but calm down with the useless words
flow 2cute\
punches 2cute
metas 2cute
vocab 2cute but read above
vote for 2 cute

by the way, no hate vote cause im in a battle with both but lil are u gonna accept or not?

Voted For: Tookute4u

lilthat was trash no punches or flow and no vocab or personals or disses that hit very weak1/10
took good vocab ok bars bad struture ok punches a weak verse with big words but it was ok overall3/10