helter skelter vs BostonLyricist
 

Battle Rules:



10-15- Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-08-04 at 06:25 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

BostonLyricist has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 06:26 PM.

helter skelter has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 06:32 PM.

who is dropin first
 

hey who is gonna drop first? u drop ur shit first ok

no feedin off my post son ight....


you from LA so ima break you apart like shaq and kobe
your girl aint got no teeth so you did the opposite of obie
you couldnt be a soilder during holloween wit face paint
Im like a college power house I stay in the top 5 national rank
Helter skelter look what boston done delt ya
Not even the icon next to actions button could help ya
Lyrical,residual complex ryhme scheme is not needed
Even in the microwave on high your not heated
More like a glass of cold water that’s been sweeted
so your thug antics you propose is misleaded,please believe it
Your intisipated to lose like j and beyonce getting married
Ima creamate you wit this post no need to get barried
You’re a fruit last name welches middle name fruit of da loom
Only time you center of attention is
when you stand in the middle of the room
Only time your verse is comes out big is when filed in zoom>>>>>>>>>hollah at cha boi

ur right my bitch dont got teeth but that bitch is ur mom
she tells me how u gave it to her in the bum
ur a wanna be jay-Z
BostonLyricist ur gay G
u like to tinker with ur shit like a tonka toy
u wanna be the next michelle jakson and touch them boys
saying "shut the fuk up" like u pack that heat
looking at my avatar beatin ur meat
talkin shit like ur legdendary
when ur not think of the men u wanta mary
thats all, thats it, u talk a big ball of shit
son have u not learned its time to qite

check it
 

some one vote


ps. check out helter skelter vs Degreez

Voted For: BostonLyricist

Not breaking the lines down 2 x 2....no need..one sided battle

Boston-Good punches and personals, some ok wordplay..not really any multis that i noticed....structure was down until last few lines...nice flow...overall decent drop..ive seen better from you..but good

Helter-Momma jokes? played and weak concept...wack structure that messed with the flow, no good punches or personals...michael jackson? another played and weak concept...you fed off his whole verse...over all weak ass battle...elevate and take on newbs, they're the only ones you'll beat, sorry kid

Voted For: BostonLyricist

yo man dis battle was a lil onesided but it was koo

wordplay-boston
vocan-boston
Strcutre-Helter
flo-Boston
punches- Boston

a lil onesided but yall both did yall thing but in the end punches won it for Boston

v/Boston

Emergin, your chinky ass eyes musta mistook structures...cuz helters lines were spread out everywhere

Voted For: BostonLyricist

this goes to boston cause his punches were better his flow was better his structure was better and i liked it more. Lobsided battle. Helter you got some potential but you need to elevate, your rhymes are kinda simple and you could use more wordplay. Yo come drop a honest vote at my battles

Me vs Robkilla
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139783

Me vs Sin
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139911

Me vs Helter Skelter
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139991

Good battle

Voted For: BostonLyricist

open: Boston started out strong
close: And Boston finished strong
personals: xNither had very strong personal if any
metas: Both yall was ok on this....
punches: The harde punches I feel went ta Boston



win: Boston

Voted For: BostonLyricist

wow!!! no match///i hated boston's intro, but i see that he's gettn way better...keep elevating...your punches gave him something to dream about...lol...helter, i didnt like your flow, it seemed like in some parts you didnt finish it, but that was just the way u worded it, some rhymes wouldve been tight if u worded them right...work on that...vote to bostonlyricist...good shtit playa...

drop some votes on the below battles, i'll return honest favors when i make it to ya'll battles people