Oliver Twist Has Landed (PEEP)
 

New to rapbattles.com....looks decent thus far. I'm mainly a battle addition but I can create impressive topicals! I'm just gunna key something up real quick instead of leaving a voice message..lol.

Head of my class...students with rhymes
intuitive minds, spittin' hell fire like lucifers time
Afraid to live 'cus we all assuming we dien'
It's like mc's lose half of self as soon as we sign
I'll stay high on my pedestol serving nuts like a stewerdess flyin
See the punchline?..I'm down for making dough like lunch time
but believe i'll take the last shot like T-Mac at crunch time
I'm a polished lyricists ya never seen such rust shine
Tylonel I crush mine
The product of intervenous drugs and corrupt minds
A must have like the news need photographers
that's about the equation that crews need Oliver
But all of ya.....don't wanna battle this top prospect
Is this keystyle still runnin' or do ya need a pause yet
five minutes..what it takes to deliver
a decent thought that causes goosebumps and makes ya shiver
A bigger ocean of talent haste lets praise the river
It's between raw and cooked believe me we can all taste the difference
New to the site infamous rap battles
I'm not ignorant..but fuck manners I'll smack adults
Swim up my creek..defeat is effortless if ya weak with cracked paddles
This is rap a thine line from poetry
My rhymes are holy like a thousand knives pokin' me
I'm potent with unleashed potentcy
A secret...naw ain't no hush in need
I've let it all out so this show must proceed.......


Just a quick key..and believe me that was quick..but I'm feelin it..as I do with most of my stuff...as i mentioned I'm more of a battle fiend but I thought who needs a resume...gimme five or ten and this is what the outcome is.....so peep it critic and get at me..I should be on for most of tonight!.......2

thats tight u want in Franchise

Franchise?.....What's the crews main motive on the site?...battle or topical?.......get at me......2

UnBroken Perfection....topical,text, and audio crew....

Unbroken Perfection huh..sounds decent.......whats the current rooster?..........2

ayo capitol punishment is tha crew to be down with. we jus starting but if u want u can have the a co-leader spot.

Capital punishment sounds decent as well man...I may just stay solo for a bit..get used to this site....but on the other hand i may join a crew....whats the current rooster of capital so i can check some of your stuff...........2

drop your verse in the councils crew forum in the auditions section and we will vote

I may just stay solo man....But i'll check out the thread no doubt...........2

i jus started recruitin mc's so basically its u, me, the kid p-dizzle so far but we bout to get a couple more

I think I may just stay solo for a while man..I wanna see the site through ya kno'!..but i'll keep your crew in mind in the future.........2

lol why the hell did u make this thread then

lol...good question....see i thought i may have been interested in joing a crew but i think i would like to check evrything out first ya dig.....but thanks for your concern man....but if i get a nice crew whos interested then i'll get down...........2

lol aiight

Oliver, you seem like you'd do muh better with topical battles than text....i suggest dropping 10-20 lines in the Hardwood Class-Sickz Audition forum....one of the best crews on RV