MR_ILLUSIVE vs chitownsoulja
 

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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 30

Check in by: 08-06-04 at 12:42 PM

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MR_ILLUSIVE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 12:43 AM.

chitownsoulja has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 12:44 AM.

yo spit first mutha fucka .......... bring yo shit

mr illusive u think you hot prove it
i aint even seen u rap but i can tell you gon lose this
its useless i cant be touched
wit this nine i clutch always ready to bust
you aint ready for j and that i trust
cuz wit da the ak ill fuck u up
even in broad day u better run and duck
ill light you up like a firework show
dont you know j got the sickest flow
so ridiculous you cant touch me hoe
to the top of the game is where ima go
puttin ya name to shame just to let u know
im the kang and youll never dethrone me homey you a phoney leave you dead gone and bloody
you dead wrong buddy like biggy said
tell ya hoe to come ova and gimme head
i thought i told ya its ova neva shoulda fucked wit a chitown soulja

c'mon pussy yo scared to spit first or shit
jus hurry up n fukin spit bitch :thefinger

now u spit pussy talkin all that shit lets see what you got you lil hoe

wat yo 2 afraid to go first bitch hahaha
fuck u really are a pussy bitch :thefinger

ok listen to this there once was this guy his name was chitownsoulja yet all he fuckin was a dam doll bludger thinkin hes cool but god dam man your nothin but a dam fool, thinkin yo can rap man yo must be fuckin whack chasing after guys ass cracks, man yo really are gay so stay the fuck oda here before you end up jumpin of the end of a pier with a concrete block straped to your cock oh dam man i forgot you aint got a mutha fuckin cock.......... yo jus a bitch that thinks they can rap but shit man yo god dam fuckin crap....!!!

u suuuuuuuck
 

buddy u got killed maybe u should stop rapping and get a new hobby biiiiiiiiiiiiiiitch

your an embarassment to white people all over america
how does it feel to get your ass kicked

This was feedback posted for MR_ILLUSIVE
 

Both of your guys verses sucked ass...you both need to eleveate and work on gettin a better structure, flow and throwin better punches

chitown...SHUT THE FUCK UP...your verse sucked just as bad as his did...your an embarassment to whatever race you are and to the rest of the members on rv

Voted For: chitownsoulja

Chi takes this one. Fix ya structure a little bit Mr its kinda hard ta read dogg. Chi had better punches and a better structure ta go with it. Some good creativity in there too. Alright battle. Elevate both. Chi gets the vote for harder punches, creativity, and a much better structure.

Vote-Chi

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