MaNiPuLaTiOn vs GEE
 

Battle Rules:

12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-07-04 at 02:52 PM

Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in.

GEE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 03:36 PM.

My rhymes 'manipulate' your mind, hypnotize your comprehensive "wisdom",
you talk "perplexed" with "jibberish lines", like you were studying "confusion"ianism.*
She says shes a “princess”, but shes havin problems with her sex life,
this bitch cant get a “prince”, cuz she’s as ugly as “Shrek’s wife”!
I’ll lyrically “smoke” this bitch and “pass her” like her sig with her click.
and I’ll “pop” this trick “out” faster than her tits in her pic**!
You rhyme "cheap" like "Longs Drugs" products,
Theres no "Safe-Way" to "rip" me, I "slice" you easy like plywood gettin "sawed up".
Try to get on my par, so you obsess to “pens nd books” like rappin “scholars”.
I tightly choke, and squeeze around this bitch’s throat, like turtleneck collars.
This bitch rhymes “plain” like all white shirts…you be hurt tramp,
Youre workin hard but “goin nowhere”…like a skater on a vert ramp.

*”Confusion”ism = Confucianism. A religion started by a Chinese man named Confucius who often talked about ‘wisdom’. It is written in Caligraphy, or in the writing of the Chinese. It looks like a bunch of ‘jibberish’ thus makin ya ‘confused’ and perplexed. So I’m sayin all her rhymes are jibberish. Damn…I feel like a fuckin teacher man.
**Her pic: http://www.face-pic.com/pages/view_pic.php?pic=3982788&user=ddonna&pn=6&psid=6&id=1456526&type=1&apics=0&acode=28abd74f&h=1&c=0&cap=garlands%20again!

Check in and drop the verse as soon as possible. Good luck ma.

MaNiPuLaTiOn has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 12:10 PM.

time for me to chalk another win on the blackboard..
gonna go go our seperate ways..like our records backward
callin yourself a GEE..u spit so much shit..i might crap on ya..
only time u seen the "chrome"..is on ya face wen i flatten-ya
dawg u cnt hit hard enough to hurt me..u fight like a dyke..
only chance you got ta win is if this was a pillow-fight..
you aint got the POWER to beat me in this rhyme race..
if i gave u a port,polish n shine..ud still end up 2nd place..
this is my party n you to beat is "a piece of cake"..
at least wen u leave here ya guaranteed to ELEVATE..

upp............................................... ....

Voted For: GEE

WORDPLAY - GEE
PUNCHES - GEE
VOCAB - GEE
PERSONALS - TIE I GUESS
OVERALL - GEE

GEE YOU TOOJK THIS WITH A MORE COMPLEX VERSE.. THE PUNCHLINES AND LANGUAGE WAS MORE COMPLEX, ALSO YOUR RHYMES WERE GOOD.. HER WORDPLAY WAS AVERAGE, BUT YOU CAME THROUGH ON THAT.. ALSO YOU MORE WRITING WHICH CAUSED FOR MORE DISSES THAT HIT.. SO I VOTE FOR..

YO CUZ, RETURN THE FAVOR WIT A DROP IN THIS THREAD, THANX CUZ.. WUN

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352

uppin this wack ass battle........................

Why In The Hell Would You Up The Battle And It Was Already At The Top?

Up.

^^cos i wanted to upp it sonic........................


upp,upp,upp,upp,upp.

anyway, can you return the favor with a a drop in this battle.. I think something is wrong with it coz peeps keep sayin they can't vote.. but check it out right quick for me, thanx..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352

Up.

Voted For: GEE

reason:better flow a nice structure better vocab,and overall better personlas..... MaNiPuLaTiOnyour verse was aight you just lack some of these things....no hate...just fact