MaNiPuLaTiOn vs intensify effect
 

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Check in by: 08-06-04 at 09:21 PM

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MaNiPuLaTiOn has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 08:51 PM.

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 08:54 PM.

ima beat this guy like his sig...leave you "lyrically-abused"...
knock u out like mike tyson..cos you 2 are yesterdays news..
this like a funeral battle..and you the one laid to rest..
u forgot ya vest, leave u more lost than pandoras chest..
i got u turnin ya back..runnin,lookin scared like ya avatar..
aint no gangster,only time u seen chrome..is on a passin car..
your style lifeless..you couldnt blossom growin on a tree..
cos way u rhyme,u blinded like stevie wonder u cnt see..
now your battle records gonna stand at 5 wins ta ten...
eat-ya-words..wit all tha shit u drop,u makin it a pig-pen..


sum quik shit.uppin

lets go.....
u'r a fuckin joke.......

i'm laugh'in hard cuz ya toilet flow got me shitt'in
since u win quick battles, with all ya pre-writeen

u gonna wish u never meet me, pose'in all sleezy tempting
putting on ya boxser backwards for a easy entery *fag*

i know u'r type to write the hype, but u'r TO-SOFT
N only aim to"cum-hard", if rut-pual was a taget .... dip-in-FRUIT-SOUCE

plus i'll skeem with a caucasian, that'll leave u cought-N-caged-in
with punches blaze'in, that'll collaps ya flow, brake'in ya rib-cage-in

plus im use to shoting at big-heads, like shells for gillatine
with the mac-milla-beam,
u'll be a dead-dirctor the way im'a kill the sceen

BANG BANG early...

uppin............................................. .....

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

Intensify had a good opener but that was about it... the flow started to stretch and the punches and personals...if any... were soft and played... a lil multi action going on but nothing that really impressed me...tempting and entry don't rhyme...

Manip...Nice first line but the second weakened it...punches were played but they made more sense and were better formulated than Intensify's. structure was better here... no multi's...

both need to work on wordplay and punches... personals, too.

Manipulation did enough to pull this one out... keep elevatin', y'all

upp'in............................................ .......

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

Intensify-instead of starting to make shit up you should get your facts straight...one manip is a femcee...which totally fucks your whole wack verse over so thats what ya get for not doin your home work

Manip-Good structure n flow wit constant punches....and at least you didnt mistake him for a femcee like he mistook you for an emcee...maybe he didnt notice the title under your name that says princess of rv?

Vote:Manip better structure flow n punches....and since intensify didnt get his facts straight...his drop didnt make much sense

forgot to add

return the favor with honest votes in my battle against lyricalflowz23, thanks

dag, fucking shit....

i did fuck up.....

haha my fult....

fuck it i aint all here tonight, my girl got me piss we had a big argument,
now im high..

and im just fucking up....

oo-welll

i will battler her again and make it a sight to see.....l

your gonna have to...cuz its all wacked out wit her bein a fem n all

return teh favor intensify..holla

uppin.............................................

This was feedback posted for MaNiPuLaTiOn
 

MaNiPuLaTiOn won thys match son no doubt... he had lyrics and punchlines that stuck out better

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

damn guurl you been elevating
this goes to manipu for a beter verse and nice good pnuches
not good personals. you structure is good and so is your flow
I.E your was ok but you need sum elevating

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