~Logic~ vs Ice Pick
 

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Check in by: 08-06-04 at 10:20 PM

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~Logic~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 09:54 PM.

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 09:55 PM.

My Lines-rock-Cats who show up to battle wit No Weapons...Why-Combat?
My "Glare" is Death, as I put "Knives to Vowels"...so you "Die from I-Contact"
Ya Rhymes Eye-Contacts, they can "Never Real-Eyes" my Skill-is-Tight
Ya couldn't spit "Amen-Mints", if ya "Blessed Tic Tacs" or recited the "Bill-of-Rights"
I'm Built-to-Fight, my Weapons-Sentences, its all I Needed-to-End-This
D --> rown this clown In Syrup, just so he could understand the Sweetness-of-Vengence
Logic Weaker-than-Lettuce, he aint Rippin'-Me, he coudnt have Presents if he Wrote-in-Christmas-Trees
Live up to your Name, Logic...Out of Breath already, Joggin' the opposite of the Road-to-Victory???ROFL!!
What ever I Wrote-is-Infamy, ya can't get Near-It, my entire Verse-is-Fearless
Put Logic in a Cognac Bottle, cuz all my Opposition evetually Turns-to-Spirits
I Compare this Herb-to-Beerpiss, he leaks with waccnes, smash ya Cabbage-Under-my-Feet
My "Seven" Punches got Log-in-a "Daze", No Wonder ya "Week" of defeat...

Kid It's an allure I'll blow down your doors with 2 44's
blood galore/smash yo face wit my boot like I makin smore's
sweep u like choars/quit it man u really can't spit my quick bit
If a man wit aids mad u eat his booboo u couldn't spit sick shit
blood splatter make u and my gun a family matter like Urkel
smack u wit a accordian leave u purple and spinning in a circle
Like a belt I'll whoop ya ass like it's it's heart felt nice delt
U screamin help/sick wita pick ona trick I'll make this ice melt
I'll have permently tryin duck my bars like u playin limbo
Limp ho I'll hunt like the dude in da avatar window(his avy)

not my best but it's somthing

sorry had 2 fix somthing

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Voted For: Ice Pick

this vote is definitely goin to ice pick
he came wit a better flow
his structure was tight
morre punchlines not to many personals
this battle was one sided
icepick takes this one easily

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Voted For: Ice Pick

damn ice keeps taking it
logic rhyme wasnt written for rap verse, it was good but it hardly pertained to battling, its more of a street verse
ice got em wit wordplay, punches and metas
but keep working on ya shit logic u aiight
Also look out 4 my battle wit this pussy newbie jono cause im gonna murk this clown 4 saying my name all over the site

This was feedback posted for Ice Pick
 

Nice verse I cant vote yet
but dis is goin to be da first one I vote on

uppin..and vote honestly....drop links will return the favor....

Voted For: Ice Pick

Logic- Flow Was Good, Structure Was Good, Punches Were Ok, Had A Metaphor

IcePick- Punches Were Good, Flow Was Ok, Structure Was Ight, And Wordplay Was Decent...

Punches- Ice
Flow- Logic
Wordplay- Ice
Metaphors- Logic
Originality- Ice
Structure- Logic

Final Vote-----Ice Pick[/b]

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Voted For: Ice Pick

u won this wit eaz
better punches - came harder and affected easily
better flow - went to gether
better structure - way better then logic

Logic u loss wit that lame rap
weak punches - wasnt even good
nice flow - can do much better but was aight
aight structure- can do better

this was a weak battle