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Fuck you mask,,your mad because you cant write like me,,,,You bitch made nigga!!! :cussing:

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Wrote by:5MICMEDALLION

good shit man...hella long...if u eva record that...make it a feature....shits too long

Thanks im writting a book of poetry,,,and this will be one of the pages in my book.
Im only trying to give people some thing to read thats all,,,,God bless all,,,1

Can I see any more feed back people daum,,,
I know your all posting,,but when your done check this one out,,,
I have done my share of replies,,,can i get some now thanx...
God bless all

upping for feed back please....

I GUESS NOT,,,SEE IF I GIVE ANY REPLYS THEN.1
God bless all.

Who reads any more,,,I GUESS NO one,,

Woah you experienced alot of changes?

But what i dont understand is the WORD changes is suppos to be a very motional topic

but you were tlking about gangstas in mommas house....
Thats funny but you got the wrong topic to the name
This was very hood like but i dont know how to detarmn if this is a good piece without the right name dawg. . it's ok though not to complex vocab whch i like because some things can be confusing i think you need write about 1 topic instead of talking about gangsta in mommas house then taking about your respect it was ok though
6.77/10.

its just a story i made up,,,and talking about people claiming to be gangster,,but still living at home,,,,just to add humor to it
but I called It changes because the thug that use to be hard came out of prison a changed man,,,IM just making it a story,,,,,its nothing really,,,,,,i was just spitting shit
to be more creative then any thing else......I give it 8-10, MAKING IT MORE THEN WHAT YOU SAID,,,Because its really what i believe it is,,,if i live off of what others thought,,then what kind of man would i be?
If im living for others an not my self,,,but thanx for the feed back

It's still good nucca you just need to work on your structure a little bit more and make it easier to read , ok?

THANKS FOR THE FEED BACK,,,God bless all...