String9487 vs GEE
 

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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-07-04 at 02:30 AM

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String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 02:07 AM.

GEE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 02:10 AM.

dis nigga trynna hate, get off me please
before u get ground up, ...like Coffe beans
Gee think he brave n packin, try it
ima bring him mo beef than the Atkins diet
i'll send them things at u in the shape of a spherical shower
peep this awesome aresnal of lyrical power
quite playin games, stop talkin greasy jack
cuz u can get cooked real fast, like Easy Mac
its gettin heavy, u cant bare it all man
i come thru spray the whole room, like aersol cans
i make ya guts wiggle like gelatin, this lil FUCK is irrelevant
got blades for GEE that'll cut thru his skeleton
dont try n front like u clik the neener back
mines FEDERAL FELONy FLOW, urs a "misdeamenor" rap
come against me, u get bruised all up
i'ma send GEE packin, like a U-haul truck
dis lil bitch think he wont get smacked fast
chop a donkey in 2, cuz ya rhymes is HALF- ASSED
yo wit 3 blasts its over, to LEAN BACK ya shoulders
u gets no play like DreamCast controllers
ya flow got big holes like gaping fissures
dog u about as dull as some safety scissors
im #1 dis clown trynna snatch if from me
String on the scence strapped up like crash test dummies
ima pop ya top like im drinkin a Snapple
Only time Gee hard "core" is when he eatin an apple
n yo im the boss wit shit
so stop actin like a condom n prick get off my dick..bitch HAHAAAAAAAAA

String thinks hes the king, more like the "jack" of RV,
I break this "ass" easier, than a bottle of Bac-ar-di.
I plant “bombs”, for MCs in “skyscrapers”, it’s time for your killing,
I'm supposed to be scared cuz a piece of "string is in the building"?*
You must be kidding, I kill this “herb” like I’m pissin on a garden,
and “spoil” this bitch, like drinkin milk from the carton!**
I left heat on the mic, that will leave your hands bleedin like chokin a sword.
This bitch is decreasin levels, like an elevator with a bro-ken cord!
The days fly by, and you aint no different, a routine challenger,
cuz I’ll “flip you over to the next” like a daily calendar,
I sting String like a bee..6 wins?, I’m finna switch ya luck,
Call the paramedics please!, they’ll have ta use “your name” ta stitch ya up.
I’m speakin the truth, and…”I know lord, I’m in the confessional,
“But I slapped String so hard, he did a 360 like a snowboard professional.”
Get someone ta fix game, I got people saying..“This dick’s lame”,
last battle tonight, put this bitch ta rest like Rick James.

*Look at his sig.
**Drinkin milk from the carton gets it spoiled cuz saliva gets in it.

-Youll get tha rest.

OOOH..I'm likin that verse mayn. GOOOOD SHIT. May tha best MC win. Good luck. This is a good battle people. Don't sleep yet!

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This was feedback posted for String9487
 

I cant post but if i could it would be strings. Gee had some fire ass punches but Strings came back harder. Both of your structures was on point. Flow was on point too. Strings because his punches just hit harder. Good shit to the both.

yea this was a good battle man letts get some votes

Voted For: String9487

dayum...string took this from start to finish...esp. liked the beginnin, "ground up like coffee beans"...good original shit..

string: i liked your all around flow, like i said fro start to finish u had it...yo multies, metas, rhyming nad all that was hot...the end was gay however...it aint happenin, but u already had the battle luckly before u got to the end...keep elevatin

gee: u had a good battle, but some parts i wasnt understandin, and i wasnt too much feelin...u had a good flow altho, but ur beginin was terrible, and intro is 70% of the flow...so i cant give u this one playa...

overall: ya'll was on each other level, but strings ride left gee in the dust in the middle, and stayed ahead...thats wut i like...good battle...ey,yo, drop HONEST votes on the battles u see below jigga, he's escorting u to them, just click the link peoples

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Voted For: GEE

WORDPLAY - TIE
PUNCHES - GEE BARLEY
VOCAB - TIE
PERSONALS - GEE
OVERALL - GEE

BASICALLY THIS WAS A TIGHT ASS BATTLE.. GEE AND STRING BOTH HAD NICE WORDPLAY AND GOOD SET UPS FOR PUNCHES.. THOUGH AFTER THE SET UPS I THINK THAT GEE DELIVERED HARDER WITH WITTIER MORE COMPLEX PUNCHES.. NOT TOO MANY PERSONALS BUT THE ONE THAT STOOD OUT IS WEN GEE ASKED Y SHOULD HE BE SCARED OF A PIECE OF STRING.. OVERALL STUCTURE WAS COO TOO SO BASED OF THE ABOVE, GEE YOU GET MY VOTE..

KEEP IT GANGSTA AND RETURN THE FAVOR IN MY THREAD, THANX...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140352

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Voted For: GEE

Gee - hot shit man what can I say I was feelin ya whole verse...

String - why didnt you come this hard verse me? lol..anyway ya shit was straight, cept instead of aimin at him sometimes you were just talkin bout what u do..

This was feedback posted for String9487
 

More lines, more punches, no multis...and your punches didn't hit as hard...nah mean.. but there was alot more to say...only 1 or 2 personals and thats wat really counts in a battle doc.

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