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rockster418 08-07-04 05:35 AM

rate this ppl again!plz!thx!
 
The new world order according to this mc
Taking it from the start to the very end-can't you see?
We taking it slowly---Burn-the-rays-with-me
Juggle the-ball---chain lose--maknig a phone call
You blocking my way--move before i spit on your face and giving you a hard fall
Fat ass fuck..you claim you can play sports...what is it?american football?
You claim to show me the power of the white
You said you are gonan show me how they fight
And you didn;t do it yea man?datz rite!
you think you have 6 pac with your body coordination?
Taking things slowly whacking you till you lose your patient
When this lyrics are done your gonna know whu is the boss
but now signing off...this is truly yours

La Cosa Nostra 08-07-04 06:52 AM

didnt like it... same problems as before... u still havnt elevated..

read the tutorials.

KroNuz 08-07-04 12:10 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Poet
didnt like it... same problems as before... u still havnt elevated..

read the tutorials.



^--lol.... he right.. read tutorials.. and watch but dont bite on vet battles, or open mics... might help you see how you could fix your style up


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