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TURBAN 08-07-04 03:33 PM

tell me what you think
 
i ask the questions
and get the reprecussions
because i dare to not follow the simple majority
i make the majority come to me
it becomes "my"jority
do you just do what you do
to figure out what it takes
to make it ?
or do you want to figure out what it is
that makes it worth fighting about?
its easy to forget
but when its said again
it comes back in an instant
everything that you thought
you pushed away
flooded the damned and
hit you head on
this is the point where you decide
will i run or stay?
most of you would say you would stay
but we all know you would run
the second question is what about the pause?
the pause that holds you in
the postion for the last few seconds
the pause that holds fear
but with that fear comes the cross culture
recollection of what makes you who you are
now i ask you again
do you ask the questions or do you
just put your questions together
from past pasts that
really didnt affect you
and what you did tomorrow
will affect you today
when you understand the meaning of things
you will find the keys to life

Nynth Degree 08-07-04 03:37 PM

I ain't all in to poetry and stuff, but that was aight. It carried on a little long, but you'll get better over time. Keep postin', I'll catch you later.

X-Emption203 08-07-04 03:37 PM

thats really good keep it up it got me thinkin alot

TURBAN 08-07-04 03:41 PM

thanks guys for the feed back


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