TURBAN vs The Kid P-Dizzle
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-07-04 at 05:09 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

TURBAN has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 04:40 PM.

The Kid P-Dizzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 04:40 PM.

lets get this on a roll i'm feeling good first actual battle

ok keep your hands where i can see em i'm back the one and only
big turban here to rap round you so you wanna come around saying drop me a mic
well i'm bout to drop you a right hook knock you down knocked out
k-o i'm winner cham-pion golden gloves
i took it beat you while washing the dishes
i cut up your body crushed memories
i'll hit you like a heart attack
relax you about to pass say hi to the big man on your way up
i'm sick yea thats right i rhyme slick you cant stick it
big boi loves to spit , the trick to the matter is but we all know you like playing with rubber dicks

shit i thought we were going to do to
dammit haha o well i'm learnin

Time to extinguish the vermin, yeah, he ain't worth it/
I'm damn near certain I'm gonna hurt this punk Turban/
It's serious now, no more games wit' me/
You's a fuckin' Arab but scared to board a plane wit' ME/
It's plain to see we all know that your wack, you're Middle-Eastern?/
Well your mom don't shave neither, I know for a fact/
Come on, get at me fag, bring your uncle Sadaam/
I pull you out your taxi cab and whup you wit' a Qu'ran/
I'm more fly than Apani herself/ (Apani B Fly Emcee)
Why don't you do us all a favor motherfucker and kamikaze yourself/

lol i will accept defeat good run pauly haha we'll have a rematch when im better

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Kid P-Dizzle wins this hands down cause first off,he had sum ok personals talking about planes and him comitting suicide witch was coo cause of TURBAN's name.Some of them were quiet weak and at times his structure made me wonder what was supposed to rhyme with what.But turbans,on the other hand was totally crappy,no hate man but if you use //'s in your verse try to make an aabb rhyming pattern.Those are the least confusing ones to use.Most of your disses were old such as calling him gay saying he plays with dicks..yeahyeah we know how it goes.Also,use WAY less self ups in your verse cause youre here to diss your opponent,not promote yourself.remember that.No real complexity in either verses but Kid P-dizzle had superiority in every category except self upping.

v/Kid P-Dizzle.

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

damn, that was a raw verse, you hit him with funny personals, that won this for you... turban... you cant really battle rap if you dont rhyme. i strongly reccomend it next time. Kid P-Dizzle... if you knew he really was middle eastern tho... would you still have put all those racist jokes about him?
whateva...
Return tha favor
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139502 me vs. mc xplicit
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139297 me vs. goats

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

Kid ~ come nice punchs hit hard, and had a nice flow.
This one bar won the battle,,..

It's serious now, no more games wit' me/
You's a fuckin' Arab but scared to board a plane wit' ME


Turban ~ Didn't really feel your verse apart form the
close. You didn't drop any clear punchs or anything,
also you flow was off. Vocab wasn't their and it just lacked
everything I think.. No hate""

Vote ~ The Kid

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

thats sad how no lines rhymed for turban *shakes head*..aiyo elevate alot, stop battleing and go pratice wit a pen and pad..get a nursery rhyming book or something...that sad...your flow was terrible, no punches landed, and everything was spread out and strucuted bad....*shakes head*
p-dizzle, u proved me wron again, i thought u were sorry because of your generic name, but u showed me some fire, good shit...sugestion...find more personals, u got one personal and kept it thu the whole flow, good battle tho...keep practicin

drop votes on the below battles, i'll return a HONEST favor

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

i unno i liked Kids flow a bit betta, both are aight so no hard feelings check this

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140803