FuxJustAWord vs Barz&Penstripes
 

Battle Rules:

8-15 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no d/r

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-07-04 at 11:17 PM

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Barz&Penstripes has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 10:47 PM.

FuxJustAWord has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-07-04 11:03 PM.

Fux-Just-A-Word is not In-Tri-Cate
He NEVER-LANDS blows but did you know he's In-To-Kids
I'm a Simple-10, He' a Simple-Ton
Hard in a SHY-TOWN, His AVATAR exposed the Bitch-in-Him
U Spit lines that men would never throw
Relying on places only a Chica-Go
Ur dumb lines shows a re-tards flow
One pen stroke will have your Beating-heart-slowed
You're Brawling with lines throwing CITRUS PUNCHES
When I throw I'm used to hurting a BITCHES STOMACHE
Kid you have nothing battlling u is quite obsurb
U said it best who cares FUX-JUST-A-Word

This man say he from brooklyn, well shit, for pete's sakes
Im hungry like Puffy, so get me sum cheesecake
this mans 'sweet' to the beat, he aint ever got deals
users told u to 'Elevate', so ur wearin High heels
u straight outta new york, the yankees in a deadlock?
u so weak in defeat, ima choke u wit my "red sock"
I know it's hard to even imagine all this white boy's hype
Ill leave u in "bars" in the "pen", wearin white & black "stripes"
chillin wit shyne wen u rhyme, u think u gainin fame? never.
why dont u come down to earth, like the World Trades Center

good battle man............. those were sum good lines........... now im juss uppin for votes.....

Voted For: FuxJustAWord

altho you started out weak, you did pick it up and run wit it in the middle to the end
this battle was weak, but i liked it cause it was neck n neck...i seriously didnt kno who to vote for...but i have to go wit 'fux', cause his punches and metas hit WAY harder...his style is wack to me, but everyone has there own...

'barz', you did yo thing, i liked it, but it wasnt good enough, u almost had it

overall: both need to elevate....lol so get some high heels, naw...lol...need to keep practicin too...'fux'? u gotta come harder than that on your intro's, its gonna start to hurt you in other battles

oh yea..peoples check out my personal escorter, escorting ya'll to some open battles by ya boy...drop a vote, and recieve a HONEST vote from me...peace

uppin for votes people

Voted For: FuxJustAWord

this was a prttey easy one
i liked fux punches and metas but that close was predictable
flow fux
struc tie
vocab bars
punch fux
metas fux
overall fux
ok battle ill drop a link to mine vote honest

uppin for some votes............................................. ill return the favor

uppin for sum votes people............ ill return the favor with an honest vote if u vote on this

vi voted honest, do same on thishttp://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=139957

uppin