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Carpe_diem 08-08-04 07:18 AM

Beauty - Feed Bak Plez
 
They say that true beauty’s under the skin,
They couldn’t be more wrong.
If those very words are true,
Why am I still the lonely one?
I’ve tried to be the best I can,
Believe you me, I’ve tried,
But here I am still all alone,
After many tears I’ve cried.
I’ve suffered many heartbreaks,
Pains and crushing blows,
How much I ache within,
Oh nobody knows.
It seems that nobody cares
How lonely that I am
They may see all the pain I’m in
But they just don’t give a damn.

:huh:

battlefreak 08-08-04 11:33 AM

that's pretty good

Carpe_diem 08-09-04 05:48 AM

Thanx
 
Thanx Battlefreak . I write a bit of poetry, but i neva no wat to fink if it. Thanx for da feed bak. :thumbup:


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