Load minds with code design to rip microphones and send
 

Load minds with code design to rip microphones and send
Cyclones to domes some cats try to go home do head spins
Wear bling true with things to do and sing to like USHER
Hydraulics soothe so solid and smooth like polish chrome, rusher
Like halfbacks in football,
From a scum town but my rhymes come down like an avalanche
Drop legit rocks and hit blocks with force on course like a tree branch
Avenge death with a syringe of stress poke veins this dope
Stains your mind like crack, with vampire fangs broke
Necks when the moon’s full, will soon pull out a heart with this art
Met Dracula in the club became a spectacular thug first blood new start
Avoid enemies’ typhoid in vicinities employed with remedies to attack
Try to escape from fake scum so I take some hallucinating whack pack
Of drugs because reality is a fatality just creating the facts
Evade rent hasn’t paid a cent slum lord pissed at this
Need cash soon or he may proceed to smash my room brisk
Frustrate him let me educate them, you all bad credit twist
Sad and pathetic can’t borrow a dime; it’s sorrow time
Tomorrow not designed for me this is a horror blind
Turn away hustlers concerned today about rattled busters
Come on route in saddled clusters be out and about like cattle rustlers
Live funny and give money to stores for food price high
Like nice sky my paycheck stay wrecked somebody let the advice fly

yo m an nice shit

fix your structure...5/10

thanks for the props and critique for real yo