monsoon vs big tissle
 

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6 -15
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: unlimited

Check in by: 08-11-04 at 02:17 PM

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big tissle has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 02:18 PM.

MONSOON has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 02:23 PM.

look at this bitch ass nigga
too scared to pull a trigga
plus he wont even have a bomb
his crew aint like the talibon
not even a monsoon but the eye of a storm
but his lyrics has made him just a thunderstorm
look at the terrorist terrorisin the school faculty
but in real life hes terrorisin his moms stank pussie
yo man go ask your mom fo some quaters
cause your water slide just ran out of rain water

in talibon mean taliban just so it could rhyme

aight chek it,


....So why battle me,when ill cause a catastrophy
in your anomomy, this cat swallows my ink, telegraphically
nuff said, get on the floor with your palms spread
Ill palm your head, then ill do your wifey all over again,
Ill take your (air time) literally and audiologically
even if you was electronically made, ill still put out your battery,
this bitch tis is piss and wish he rips discs like this
tungue twista in a form of an rap matrix, forming punches to clips---
this cat studda when he was makin his aviater,
big missle turned big tissle, now he wish he could go back a day later..................

aight yall uppin votes, drop me some links of some feedback and ill do the same for u !

yo uppin fo some votes keepum comin

come on yall vote

yo can any body vote on this shit this shit is hott.FIRE!

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This was feedback posted for MONSOON
 

wont let me vote....................................

When You Go To Vote It Says You Have To Have Unlimited Posts, So Yah Fucked Up But Heres My Vote, Go To Battle Forum Problems And Tell Them Who I Wanted To Vote For And Theyll Add It..

Blah This Was One Sided

Monsoon- Punches Connected, Flow Was Good, Metaphors Were Decent

Big Tissle- Verse Was Basic, Structure Was Ok, Punches Didnt Hit Hard

Punches- Monsoon
Flow- Monsoon
Wordplay- Niether
Metaphors- Monsoon
Originality- Tie
Structure- Monsoon

Final Vote- Monsoon

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This was feedback posted for MONSOON
 

*nuff said, get on the floor with your palms spread
Ill palm your head, then ill do your wifey all over again,*

that ate em up right there 2 me!
"Monsoon"
-multis=nice an witty
-structure=smooth like PS2 graphics(couldve been X-Box!)
-punchez=hittin like suga shane mosley vs vernon forest(lol)
-overall=nice middle weight fight.

my vote monsoon"he ripped the bone grissle out big tissle"lol
(yall holla at me!!)

This was feedback posted for MONSOON
 

big ok verse no real punches and some of it aint rhyme good flow and vocab was ok2/10.monsoon good vocab and wordplay on this good ending and a few good punches you gave good drop 5/10