MC Wrapper vs MaNiPuLaTiOn
 

Battle Rules:

6 -10
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-11-04 at 07:02 PM

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MC Wrapper has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 07:03 PM.

MaNiPuLaTiOn has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 12:14 PM.

As I lay down laws like I lay carpet,
Stop it if you think your gonna make a profit,
Dont see my ones, don’t see my guns get it,
Now tell ya friends Poppa hit it then split it,
In two as I flow with the Junior Mafia,
I don’t know what the hell’s stoppin’ ya,
I’m clockin’ ya - Versace shadeswatchin’ ya,
And my jam knock in the Mitsubishi,
Girls pee pee when they see me,
Nava-hoes creep me in they tee pee,
Once ya grin, I’m in game, begin,
From the second I started to sin,
I knew I was gona win!!!

why you thinkin u magic?...thas a lotta "hocus pocus"....
cnt cope,you write like cheap "film"..u all "outta focus"...
you jus like an wooden spoon to egg..u easy ta "beat"...
u tryin ta rap..is like tryna teach an imsomniac ta-sleep..
you style aint so "tite"..how can u claim ta b a "wrapper"?..
guy a G..seen a lotta "slugs"..but only tha type u "splatter"!..
your records more backwards..than a dj`s missed "scratch"..
u are about as "wanted"...as crabs on my "pubic thatch"..
time to say gubye from OHIO..cudnt spit fire if u was "spyro"..
u the type of cat...that wudnt find TREASURE in "cairo"...

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

MC - yo that was a good self-glorifaction rap but not good for a battle...there were NO punches and that's wack in BATTLES.....obviously ur new to this tho.....ELEVATE kid

Manipulation - u won hands down.....metas....punches......struc was coo....flow was pretty down.....i like dthis shyt a lot.....but ur structure could use a lil work playa.....overall tho nice battle....keep up tha work and keep gettin better

v/ Manip'

o and return tha favor please and vote on my battle

tha link is in my sif thanx and good luck to bof of ya

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

vote for Manipulation cuz he has harder punches....he has better word play and mettas.....ok multies...i coulda had some mad multies with the hocus pocus shit....easy....but yea....you took this

MC Wrapper
You're still a little basic....you are elevating....better structure....i seen you were tryin to use multies.....you had ok wordplay but your punches didn't hit hard enough....just keep elevating

n/ Manipulation

v/ Manipulation************

This was feedback posted for MC Wrapper
 

Their both pretty sad. Im going to have to go with MC because of the line "Girls peepee when they see me" thats got my to laugh.

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

this was a wack battle
MC wraper lines were played and alot dont make sense yo structure messed up too
manipulationb your shit was iight ya structure was good ya punches were very good personals were good

vote MAnipu

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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

Manip took this, it was kinda one-sided. She came with better flow, good punches, and Wrapper's drop sounded a lot like he bit it off Notorious BIG...
Vote - MaNiPuLaTiOn

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