intensify effect vs Da Jokah
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
u spit first

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-08-04 at 11:25 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Da Jokah has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 10:28 PM.

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 10:42 PM.

if u got ya verse then drop it.....

i will try to drop it as soon as i can.....

jokah look,
my punch-lines connect's, while u try'in to figuer out the number in a phone booth
so there aint no way u pass'ing this match...... like u was sponsored by truth

and u'r verse got the youth toss'in-me gloves befor i kill-bums
cuz this jokah heat about to retier like ricky williams

u spit with a stale-toung, no-wounder u AIM for a IM inorder to skip defeat
but i been turn'ing-tricks on the bored befor the X-games first-week

plus i kill queers and everyone knows this guy blows fellas
so i'll put a hole in ya chest big enough to make ya asshole jealous

i know why ya name jokah... cuz u know u aint a relevant spitter
be a quitter, cuz u about to get more negatives results then developing pictures......

BITCH.... BANG BANG EARLy....

my bullets will infect u..and intensly disect u//
ya fam rejects u...well ya ya aids effect u//

ight lets go

ayo man u kno i got enuff of tha dirrty green cash//
haha enuff to make ya girls legs spred like a rash//
my whole lifestyle has been straight up rags to ritches//
yur whole fam iz full up of dem kruked fags n bitches//
it aint a headache its my knowledge and iam sick in tha head//
this aint magic tricks but get so girl in ma bed it'll b a trick in tha bed//
fuck tha beef and turkey shit for dinner i want chicken in stead//
got mad connects, like ca computer-to-a-mouse//
we dont click right,u get left wit a shooter-at-ya-house//
yo iam a cat this dudes a mouse so he lookin fo some cheddah//
ya niggas kno straight up dat tha Jokah ..is way fuckin bettah//
than this cat...

e.z wun

uppin this

Voted For: Da Jokah

Da Jokah - sweet drop man, very nice flow with that verse, good structure and your punches and personals took intensify effect to school

intensify - wheres the structure man?? flow not really flowin either, good rhymes i guess and punches thrown not really connected

flow and structure - da jokah
rhymes and wordplay - da jokah
personals and punches - da jokah

one sided

v/da jokah

drop an honest vote on this battle please
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iight thanx for tha vote
uppin this shit

drop an honest vote on this battle please (punchline)
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my punches aint connect???
if u dont get my lines dont vote........

my flow was a little off in the begining but i upp'ed it towards the end....

i focus on punches not flow as u can see.....

FOR ALL VOTERS IF U DONT GET MY VERSE OR PUNCHES DONT VOTE....

bitch plz take ya shit else were... ur flow is wack and u aint punchin shit nuff said e.z


upiin this shit wun....

no your punches didn't connect very good they were gay, and i think you should head back to grade 3 and take spelling class again you herb...

uppin this shit

uppin this shit