B.X.P vs Kronuz
 

Battle Rules:

8 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 08-11-04 at 10:56 PM

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how many bars is this shit,, gotta give a limit, cuz if he spits 5 and i spit 10 shits uneven, or vice verca

also should have made post count higher but oh well

B.X.P has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 11:19 PM.

KroNuz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 11:29 PM.

Your A Bitch, Rip This Faggot Kid, My Rap Is Quick,
His Crew Name Wack As Shit, N His Skill Matches It
Wit Rhymes Im "Quick" N On "Point" Like A "Switch Blade" "Pen"
You Gona Have Dead Lines, Cuz "Bitch" Ill "Rick James" Them
This Kat Coppin A Bruise, I Stay Bombin This Dude,
Only Time A Kid Bite Ya Verse, If He Wanted To Lose
Ill Beat This Crude Bitch, N His Feeble Mind To Scripts
His "Avvy" Is "None" And His "Skill" Equal To It

-Finisher-

A Wasted Info, I Rip Flows, You Wack Kid, And Trust Me, It Shows,
And Fuck Brian, The Only Good X.p's For Windows!


I Usually Dont Explain But Here For The Last Line

Explanation
Last Line- His Names Brian, B.x.p, Blah If You Dun Get It

I regret battling you…but enough stallin…ill start spittin…
I got a feeling your verse is like Holyfields Ear parts are bitten
Kronuz? Dude…your name sucks….what does it mean….please explain
Cause all I know is that your fate….starts at the beginning of your name(KO)
I’ll glue his faith of winning to the ceiling to get his hopes up
The Council? More like nerds Who met at a computer club and grouped up
Seal any speck of hope..like kronuz was in a room with handless doors
….Ill mark him down as whack like clearance sales at clothing stores
Kronuz bites lines…like a dog… his bite is worse then his bark
Surgically implant his verse in his chest..so he could be whack at heart

Voted For: KroNuz

ahh,pretty weak battle but i was feeling kronuz punches more n his verse was more original in my eyes..pretty even on structure...bxp ya punches were ok but nothin that said damn...more wordplay in "k"'s verse 2which made it stand out more..............
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I regret battling you…but enough stallin…ill start spittin…
I got a feeling your verse is like Holyfields Ear parts are bitten
^^ok opener..played concept
Kronuz? Dude…your name sucks….what does it mean….please explain
Cause all I know is that your fate….starts at the beginning of your name(KO)
^^get more original..its ok but weak
I’ll glue his faith of winning to the ceiling to get his hopes up
The Council? More like nerds Who met at a computer club and grouped up
^^up/up.......nope don't rhyme..but ok punch
Seal any speck of hope..like kronuz was in a room with handless doors
….Ill mark him down as whack like clearance sales at clothing stores
^^..was'nt feeling this at all/worded badly
Kronuz bites lines…like a dog… his bite is worse then his bark
Surgically implant his verse in his chest..so he could be whack at heart
^^1st line sucked/2nd line was better but an average closer

there was'nt much in your verse that i thought stood up n out in this battle
you had some original ideas but wrote them badly...this verse looked rushed...
your rhyme scheme was fair....kronuz verse was'nt great but he kept his structure
better...close but i like i said by a hair kronuz gets this...

This was feedback posted for B.X.P
 

i cant vote so my feed back is as goes:

B.X.P.-
multis-okay
structure-like oprah's hips.(overall it was easy to flow)
punchez-nice(*Kronuz bites lines…like a dog… his bite is worse then his bark
Surgically implant his verse in his chest..so he could be whack at heart*)

KroNuz-
multis-you on sum eminem shit.(nice)
structure-smooth like Don King outside the ring.
punchez-uppercuts an right hooks(*This Kat Coppin A Bruise, I Stay Bombin This Dude,
Only Time A Kid Bite Ya Verse, If He Wanted To Lose
Ill Beat This Crude Bitch, N His Feeble Mind To Scripts
His "Avvy" Is "None" And His "Skill" Equal To It*)

overall-the fight was nice
my vote would go to KroNuz.
why-(it really doesnt matter my vote doent count.)because
kronuz came with better word play.thats it!!

Voted For: KroNuz

Good battle. Personally, I think K wins this with harder punches and a much better structure. I dont write my rhymes in that structure, but I was likin the short lines that came up well to the point of the punch. B had some good shit too. But some lines were played out, like the Holyfield one. Good shit ta both. But K gets the vote.

Vote-Kronuz

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Voted For: KroNuz

this was a nice battle...i think kronuz took it with harder punches and better mettas...he did started to fall off near the end, but he picked hisself back up and continued to come hard

bxp had a decent flow also...his punches were ight, and his rhyming was cool, but i think he ran outta things to say, and started mixing other raps with it somewhere in the flow cause it didnt all go together to me, but nice flow ,elevate, and keep practicin

overall, gotta give this to kronuz because his whole flow was on point, and he was consistent with better punches, and mettas