$LXDiesel vs BeatBringer
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-12-04 at 03:56 AM

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BeatBringer has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 03:57 AM.

$LXDiesel has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 03:58 AM.

hey sup mutha fuka
i no u got no game
thats y im to scared to take da pain
u rly think u gonna win
nah ima be da next jin
i no how to rap i dont need no crap
so lets c wut u got xcept ur big fat
i wanna c in da future
im thinkin u gonna grow even huga
and now heres a lil reminda
last nite i was wit yo mom and her ass said made in china
i no i aint good
but atleast i wudnt do anything for food
i can rap lika crazy mutha fuka
thats y i choze to rap u u sucka

Man you compliment all people you're dat
thinkin ya can rhyme, wut the fuck si in your head
ya one of dem complimentary basketss
cuz when u go down u dont deserve a cascket
can beat u wit one hand on a tity
wit ma eyes closed and whyle pussy leatin
i ma bring da pain to your fuckin esophagus
bring it through the throat and wrip ya fuckin lips
Fuck Me? Fuck you too, wahtcha gonna do fuckin nigga
wait tell me at answer wit me pressin teh triggar
you fuckin mooma just got fucked
and ya face must hurt cuz u just got smacked

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This was feedback posted for BeatBringer
 

ya both fuckin suck
u will never get votes on
diss battle its 2 WACK
dont ever post shit like dat
again
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Voted For: $LXDiesel

Yo BeatBringer, How do you Know he is Fat? Did you look this up cause if you didnt, then Your Rhyems are wack, you had no personals, and Frankly yah who verse was kinda weak, No hate man, but yah need to Elevate,

Diesel you took this One Fairly Easy, But also alot fo yah Punches were Weak yah gotta work on Making them Hit harder.. Anyway..

Diesel Took my vote..


Return the Fav, on one of mine!!!!!!

Yo No doubt man, BeatBringer, yah shit was Fucken wacked man, Holy Fuck i dont think i have seen anything as wack as yours, and i dont want you Voting on my shit cause If yah cant Battle, then dont vote..

Peace!!!!

Voted For: $LXDiesel

Beatbringer, ya need to elevate man, u got some nice stuff in there but gotta play it better. $LXDiesel had better punches and personals, flow was better 2... nice battle

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Voted For: $LXDiesel

beat no flow no vocab or punches no nothing please go practice in oprn mic and cypher before you battle again.diesal this is much better then your last one but you still need work.ok vocab good struture and flow punches were weak as were the disses but they beat your oppenant and got you the vote

Voted For: $LXDiesel

Yo Diesel had dis. He had some ok wordplay in his drop an his flow was better. Structure was also good. Beat your lines was a lil bit short. Fix dat an dont use no basic wordplay. OK drops by both. Keep elevatin. V/Diesel

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