A Breath Of Freestyle-give Me Feedback
 

I Know Yall Been Waitin For The Kid
Sorry To Delay Ya
I Been Breathin The Rap Game
Yall Just Smellin The Vapors
The Boy Been Doin This Thang Since He Was A Kid
Yall Just Startin To Notice How Nice He Is
And Ima Keep Writing These Rhymes
Keep Writin These Lyrics
U Aint Breathed Enough Air
To Understand When U Hear It
I Make It Hard For Yall To Breathe Under Lyrical Vapors
Me Stoppin U From Rappin Is Doin The World A Favor
Yall Say Yall Hard Got Guns And Stedily Streamin
But Dog Aint No Body Runnin Nobody Screamin
I Aint Here To Threaten Yall Dudes
But If I Run U Out Da Game I Just Do What I Do
So Ima Keep Rappin These Vapors I Aint Stoppin Dude
I Aint Cused Once On This Track And Im Still Killin U
I Came Here To Be The Nicest Young Kid On The Block
I Dont Really Care If Yall Peeps Like It Or Not
So Im Just Tryin To Be The Best Runnin My Mile
And Yall Pepole Was Just Induced To A Breath Of Freestyle

k man for a freestyle you diddent rhyme you sucked so bad these are what i rate you
wordplay:0/10
punchlines:1/10
flow:0
man that was wack shit lol

Lemme Tell U Sumtim Bitch I Wright What I Think Is Hot I Aint Worried Bout Yall Media Bitches If U Read Anyone Of My Shits Its Fire I Heard Yo Shit And It Aint Dat Hot Niggia So Dont Come To Me Hatin Bitch U Dont
Feel My Shit Cause U Aint Got The Brains To Understand
I Aint Even Stressin Niggias Like U Like Itor Love It Im One Of The Illest Bitch

one of da illest? cmon dawwwg u cant cum to dis site gloatin bout ur self, but uhh yea u dint rym if u wana post thgat then put it unda poetci orsumthin but jus keep practisin, it was ok

chalk clorox takin my line n shit practice makes perfect...lol.....
u rhymed in most places but not in sum but it was good i felt it keep practicin peace
oh thanx 4 da love on my callabo peep da other titled welcome 2 our world posted by emerginmc07 peace

ok shit for a n00b but you shud elevate
work on your shit
2/10

this guy sucks and he said nigga are you black boi?