Red Bull vs Ocelot
 

Battle Rules:

Punch Line
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

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Ocelot has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 05:45 PM.

calls himself the red bull
fellow rappers, thats dull

who is this? is this some kinda joke? ocelot was my user name on rb for the last bit i was there.....i didn't agree to this...but i need to drop sump new anyways...im down

Red Bull has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 09:05 PM.

with just this shot, you'll be left with clots of blood and snot
just to prove you aint hot, your a bitch ass cat, ocelot

**an ocelot is a cat, its like a tiger kinda

Voted For: Red Bull

aight, well i was feelin Red more man, he had a personel, got links on you, ocelot, well your punch was basic and dull ima give it to redbull

Voted For: Red Bull

nice research,red bull got this not alot of people prolly knew that...your punch was kinda weak but it rymed...ocelot your punch was weak....n dint even ryme...jus cause they spelt like that don't mean they rhyme...

Voted For: Red Bull

ok ocelot had no punch diss or personal.red bull wins with a good personal,i know what a ocelot is .red work on vocab and youll be aight.

Upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin

Voted For: Red Bull

Red BUll:

ocelot was easy to defeat, thats the only reason you won. the punch hit, but it wasnt strong. cussing in your rhymes is a newbish way to fill in words where complex vocab could be. so try not to swear, it doesnt help. first line was a good opener for this bar, but the second line didnt finish off what you began to accomplish.

i give this a 5/10

5 points b/c: lack of structure, comdey, and closure.
positive: you had some multis, keep that up.

congrats on your win.

vote:Red Bull

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Voted For: Red Bull


Ok both punches were weak but red bull actually had a punch so he gets this battle just on that fact alone, Ocelot you gotta seriously elevate cuz the wasn't a punch at all dawg

Vote: Red