C_R_E_A_M vs MaNiPuLaTiOn
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 08-12-04 at 06:31 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

C_R_E_A_M has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 06:32 PM.

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b0ut da l0ad up and blaze dis femcee
keep bustin da 9 till da clip empty
thr0win punches like Ali s0 u betta duck n weave
u can be a dime piece f0r dis pimp but still kant fuck wit me
pr0lly a lesb0z,sumwerr eatin da clit
if u claim gangsta u'll be eatin da clip
im ill,but i see immuned ta sickness
kuz like sm0ken dat dr0...girl u spitless[c0tt0nm0uth]
i g0t shit 0n my brain s0 im letin it 0ff
katch u walkin d0nt da bl0ck,wit a gl0ck im settin it 0ff
and i kall u what i wanna,u's a BITCH
its like given me brainz girl...derrs n0 use ta spit

Lets g0

MaNiPuLaTiOn has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 04:23 AM.

this guy jus like "sour cream"...he cant "rise to the top"...
u cudnt produce sumthin "fine"...if u woz a traffic cop!..
your structure got more "holes"...than a worn out sock...
even if you was a "G"...rhymes still wudnt "hit the spot"...
claim to be the "grim reaper of rap", coz ur styles dead?...
u cudnt make the crowd "bounce"..if u woz a water bed!..
claimin u "hood"...you must be stuck in ya jumper again...
the only guy i know that gets killed wit "lead"..from a pen!..
claimin u "gon fuck me up"...i think you pushed ya luck...
coz ur style "sinking"...faster than a "web-feet" less duck!..

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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

Blah My fav femcee got this shiz nitt yet again...Manip u kept it good the structure is amazing every line practically equal props there nice punches were real good funny too...you dissed this cat effectifly and it got you the win...perhaps you should start going for more elevated people because this was too easy for you.

C_R_E_A_M no hate dawg but keep elevating perhaps u should work on battling people less elevated than yourself to up the confidence because the opening line

b0ut da l0ad up and blaze dis femcee
keep bustin da 9 till da clip empty

i could jus tell u werent gonna win.

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

give it 2 MANIcuz da flow
was better da metas n punches
dat hit n dey made sense i didn't
know wut C_R_E_A_M was talkin
bout
v/MANI
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Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

ma definitely had better wordplay and originality in her verse... c came off with too much gun play in his rhymes... that shyt ain't gangsta, homie... you ain't NWA... ma also had better structure than c... killed with lead from a pen line was kinda funny..lol... c needs to work on structure, content, metas and wordplay...

ma, if ya come up with a more complicated style your shyt would be ill... ya verses are still structured a little simple but you won because of ya content...punches were way better than his

This was feedback posted for C_R_E_A_M
 

u got the v/ cause ur punches hit WAY! harder, and u also had better use of metas, all in all ur shit was hotter so u get the v/, BUT y'ont u battle a dude and see if my v/ is the same?! of drop a link so I can drop a v/ on 1 of ur other battles and see what u come with , aight -1-