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~Luciano~ 08-09-04 06:35 PM

:~Lv Collab~:Bonnie And Clyde
 
*Miss Jess*
Don't be afraid of risks,life is all about taking chances
Tryin to keep it gangsta,nothing more dangerous than romances
Walkin on wild side,all the way my boi Troop right next to me
Boys in blue buggin us,we just wanna enjoy life and be free
Only thing he's askin is to love him with all my heart 'n be loyal
No need for questions bout the cream,he treats me like i'm royal
He's no angel,when shit hits the fan,i worry he might get hurt
But as his partner in crime,i watch his back while he's doin all the dirt
His secrets are safe with me,i'll never betray my babys trust
We share everything,pain and joy,heaven and hell,hate and lust
Beware,I'd kill for him so don't ever try to mess with my man
Expect the unexpected if u wanna be ready for our Deadly plan

~~Its the 04 Bonnie And Clyde
Fuck wit it on the Wrong Night
and Have 3 Body Carriers on each Side
The Fuckin Bonnie and Clyde
U heard righ its the Lyrical O4 Bonnie and Clyde~x3

*Trooper*
Dont worry baby girl we 2 well fuckin connected and Affiliated
These Bitches betta come wit well Thought out Preperations
If they plan on Knockin us Outta our Position end up Missin
Decapatate they ear lobes and Ear Drums~Dare em 2 Listen
These Crews out here playin the game like they aint Suppose
they dont want slugs size of Toast~ put thru they Polo Coat
We out hearin fuckin wit Bundles and Boulders ya got Sticks
Final Outcome is you takein dirt naps next 2 big L Pun and Bigs
Ya aint sick its jus a slight Fever ya aint got Determination
This collab alone gets us Open Mic of the month Nomination
We fall off? Neva in the Slightest you fuckin seein Titans
No need 2 b Bias but aint no body fuckin wit Lyrical Virus

~~Its the 04 Bonnie And Clyde
Fuck wit it on the Wrong Night
and Have 3 Body Carriers on each Side
The Fuckin Bonnie and Clyde
U heard righ its the Lyrical O4 Bonnie and Clyde~x3

~Luciano~ 08-09-04 10:13 PM

Uppin

DV8 08-10-04 03:57 AM

i liked it but i deffinately think it needs a touch of "deviate"...lol...props ta both some sick shit in there...jess nice opening verse...n troop way ta hold it down 4 LV...

DQ 08-10-04 12:42 PM

Thx for feedback...uppin for some more

~Luciano~ 08-10-04 03:18 PM

Uppin

~Luciano~ 08-10-04 09:38 PM

uppin

DQ 08-11-04 04:38 AM

uppin this stuff, we'll rturn the favor

Klassic 08-11-04 05:22 AM

dats some nice shit ppl, very nice. Its good so keep this shit.

~Luciano~ 08-11-04 01:40 PM

Thanx Man



Upppin

Abraxas 08-11-04 01:48 PM

LV repping
nice fucking collab
nice shit
nice open mic
love that shit
yall tite

~Luciano~ 08-11-04 03:29 PM

4 sho

DQ 08-11-04 04:48 PM

^uppin^

Klassic 08-11-04 04:56 PM

yall got a good crew up there, adn yall sick.

DQ 08-11-04 05:14 PM

^thx boi :)

-..Jono..- 08-11-04 05:20 PM

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Props to both..

Whenever you come into a collab your forced to have "Expecations" on both individuals, also how they hold there verse down..

Havin Jess open up worked better, n it maintained a flo of workin together n i thought the way it came off was really well rounded..

Couple hooks coulda been re-worded to fit the topic a lil more, but nothin that could take away from the way the collab worked out, keep doin your thing both of you props(Y)....

Vote on one of the battles/all if you got time:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141598
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141355
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141421


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