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:~Lv Collab~:Bonnie And Clyde
*Miss Jess*
Don't be afraid of risks,life is all about taking chances Tryin to keep it gangsta,nothing more dangerous than romances Walkin on wild side,all the way my boi Troop right next to me Boys in blue buggin us,we just wanna enjoy life and be free Only thing he's askin is to love him with all my heart 'n be loyal No need for questions bout the cream,he treats me like i'm royal He's no angel,when shit hits the fan,i worry he might get hurt But as his partner in crime,i watch his back while he's doin all the dirt His secrets are safe with me,i'll never betray my babys trust We share everything,pain and joy,heaven and hell,hate and lust Beware,I'd kill for him so don't ever try to mess with my man Expect the unexpected if u wanna be ready for our Deadly plan ~~Its the 04 Bonnie And Clyde Fuck wit it on the Wrong Night and Have 3 Body Carriers on each Side The Fuckin Bonnie and Clyde U heard righ its the Lyrical O4 Bonnie and Clyde~x3 *Trooper* Dont worry baby girl we 2 well fuckin connected and Affiliated These Bitches betta come wit well Thought out Preperations If they plan on Knockin us Outta our Position end up Missin Decapatate they ear lobes and Ear Drums~Dare em 2 Listen These Crews out here playin the game like they aint Suppose they dont want slugs size of Toast~ put thru they Polo Coat We out hearin fuckin wit Bundles and Boulders ya got Sticks Final Outcome is you takein dirt naps next 2 big L Pun and Bigs Ya aint sick its jus a slight Fever ya aint got Determination This collab alone gets us Open Mic of the month Nomination We fall off? Neva in the Slightest you fuckin seein Titans No need 2 b Bias but aint no body fuckin wit Lyrical Virus ~~Its the 04 Bonnie And Clyde Fuck wit it on the Wrong Night and Have 3 Body Carriers on each Side The Fuckin Bonnie and Clyde U heard righ its the Lyrical O4 Bonnie and Clyde~x3 |
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i liked it but i deffinately think it needs a touch of "deviate"...lol...props ta both some sick shit in there...jess nice opening verse...n troop way ta hold it down 4 LV...
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Thx for feedback...uppin for some more
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uppin this stuff, we'll rturn the favor
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dats some nice shit ppl, very nice. Its good so keep this shit.
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Thanx Man
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nice fucking collab nice shit nice open mic love that shit yall tite |
4 sho
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^uppin^
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yall got a good crew up there, adn yall sick.
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^thx boi :)
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Props to both..
Whenever you come into a collab your forced to have "Expecations" on both individuals, also how they hold there verse down.. Havin Jess open up worked better, n it maintained a flo of workin together n i thought the way it came off was really well rounded.. Couple hooks coulda been re-worded to fit the topic a lil more, but nothin that could take away from the way the collab worked out, keep doin your thing both of you props(Y).... Vote on one of the battles/all if you got time: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141598 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141355 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141421 |
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