OGfromPawtucket vs saaran
 

Battle Rules:

10 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-12-04 at 08:58 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

OGfromPawtucket has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 08:59 PM.

saaran has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 09:02 PM.

Try talking to me i won't let you
if you do i'll have my boyz from the bucket get you
cuz you think ur hardcore when you're really not
i know this for a fact you wouldn't meet me at the spot
that i pointed out on the map
you were probably takin a nap
u better be readin this while i'm takin my piss
and your still think about what to write
Holla back

for crediablitly some rappers reiterate a sound
for credability your an og from a made up town
thats disgusting,the way you accepted, itellectually
i'm above all emcee, verbally and textually
ask to have sex wit me, just to have rap in you
muscle tissue dosnt matter i retract all sineu
ive seen ya verses played and awfully structred
your verse sucks PERIOD, even if its un-puncterd
how you win??? mm dats a blunder now...
face down six feet under, ya dats how you underground

fuck ers vote on dis shit man....

vote ass

Voted For: saaran

this battle goes to saaran his multies were pretty on point
and his punches were alot better
pawtuckets flow was pretty basic nothin special at all
saaran had the overall better flow structure and all
holla at me
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136344

Voted For: saaran

yo dis goes to saaran he had betta vocab and punches and i ean u jus need to elevate OG man u need to betta vocab wordplay and strdcutre man u need da whole 9 i mean i see potential man u can do much beta,

v/saaran

yo hit my battle up rite here iite 1 love


http://community.rapverse.com/showb...491625&posted=1

Voted For: saaran

open: saaran - by far
close: saaran - also by far
personals: tie
metas: neither had any
punches: both, but saarans were better
multis: saaran, awsome job

win: saaran

i think OG needs to do some elevating with...structure, vocab and wordplay...props to both tho...but I think everyone will see that this was one-sided...

Take the time with an hounest vote as I did for you... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141141

up for votes man

Voted For: saaran

Saaran had better wordplay, a lot better vocab, and good structure also. Neither of you had really great punches, or personals at that, but Pawtucket your style is quite simple. But no hate, you just need some practice...
Vote - Saaran

Return the favor, but OG can't since he already CREW VOTED on this battle. Vote honestly or don't vote at all.
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Voted For: saaran

for crediablitly some rappers reiterate a sound
for credability your an og from a made up town
...nice set up to the punch, big puch
thats disgusting,the way you accepted, itellectually
i'm above all emcee, verbally and textually
...good flow, not feelin da self glor
ask to have sex wit me, just to have rap in you
muscle tissue dosnt matter i retract all sineu
....first line nice, secound, whats a sineu?
ive seen ya verses played and awfully structred
your verse sucks PERIOD, even if its un-puncterd
.....nice wordplay,
how you win??? mm dats a blunder now...
face down six feet under, ya dats how you underground
...wordplay, but played punch

.........
og-
Try talking to me i won't let you
if you do i'll have my boyz from the bucket get you
... not a punch
cuz you think ur hardcore when you're really not
i know this for a fact you wouldn't meet me at the spot
....how do u know that for a fact?
that i pointed out on the map
you were probably takin a nap
u better be readin this while i'm takin my piss
and your still think about what to write
Holla back

... ya no closer, and no punch. read other battle to get a hang of this and to know what a punch is.

HIT MY BATTLE UP VS. DUSTY IN MY SIG!!!!!!!!!