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Houdini 08-09-04 10:42 PM

~= Shattered and Torn =~
 
~*Lettin My grip's-loose, Shellin these'clip's'too Just wonderin why I'm feelin like this shit dude*~
~*Featurin These hits that fit through, Like puzzle pieces that Only I was meant to do*~
~*Leaving My heart In the open for attack, While these surgeons open me and relax, Kick there leg's on my organ's, Cuz I'm havin this "heart' attack"*~
~*Throwin Me in the same box as these cat's, 1 rough fight, But the roughest pussy I've had*~
~*Like runnin sandpaper accross your back, I wish I can Glue a shoe to your butt, So you can stick your own foot in your ass*~
~*Puttin Food on your spine, hopin you can gimme-sum-"feed-back"*~
~*Forgettin my dream's, Forgettin my past, forgettin who I was, Forgettin who's runnin-mah-ass*~
~* Got these cop's askin me 3 thousand questions, Never asked me how I was, Shyt Cuz' They don't care to mention*~
~*Justa Young boy Pissen in the wind, Wearing these clothe's cause thats what I was dealt wit'*~
~*Burnin' middle fingers blazin these lyrics on paper, Makin my only life feel like Im goin crazy*~

Pro-Rican 08-09-04 11:33 PM

The opening flow was sickness...it started to drown out...but it was popping...StAY uP

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PayDay 08-09-04 11:44 PM

was aight mane...8/10...opening was sick...the last part needs some revison...other than that...good look


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