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PayDay 08-09-04 11:39 PM

Where i am From...give me some feedback please...
 
You piss me off, i know my shit and I scream assassination
Now my prescriptions feelin fair, i keep my medication

See i'm a addict takin' drugs, that give me quite a thrill
Diana ross and lady's sing the blues got me poppin' pills

I'm going through a thang, my mind's about to crack
Somebody took my sack, i gots to take it back

My heart is in the ghetto cause the ghetto's steady pacing me
Last night i slit my wrists cause jason was steady chasing me

What's on my mind is victims in the baskets
Taking place in some motherfucker's caskets

A lot is on my mind and there's a lotta pressure pressing me
America and its system, i figure that they're testing me

It's time to see a murder, my glock is the object
I'm labeled as a killer, i cause more grief than the projects

Nothing worth living for but my family and the money
I pack a .44, so save the fur for the easter bunny

I turn around and start poppin, what's up homey?
Just like the geto boyz my mind is playin tricks on me

PayDay 08-09-04 11:41 PM

people please take some time and give me some feed back...thanks...1

PayDay 08-10-04 12:04 PM

uppin for some feed back peoples...u give me some i will give yalls some feedback..thanks

PayDay 08-10-04 02:48 PM

yea it is missin somthin...thanks for tha advice...bak to tha pad...uppin for more feed back...1

EmerginMc07 08-10-04 03:00 PM

yea it was prety good dawg i felt it kinda got a lil mnore played and messed up towars da end nyea it is missin sumthin so yea i mean jus keep prctisin and elevatin


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