Pimp Slapped... tonight (Franchise Diss)
 

YEah... check this

Chi-Town... all the way to KC... HoE

King of Chicago.. aka lil chi one, Startin' shit but can't back it up/
Call the 5-0... 1-8-7, Village brought the gun, Clit... back it up/
Scared of me... yeah you should be, King of the K to the fuckin' C/
pall bearers will carry thee.. yes... it could be, V to the fuckin' P/
I ain't even tryin', But your ass just got pimp smacked, now bow down/
Leave your mom cryin', You crashed, Burned... bitch ass, Reppin' L-Town/

Now to my real shit...

Look, you can carry guns like Carson Jet... But It plastic/
Shook, Rhymes I fire back like Arsonist... When I rap it/
The only pistol u got is a water gun... best you grab it
My rhyme missle I shot is a hotter one... suggest you blast it/
I run the midwest... you bitchless incest... wanna be village/
U Gonna witness... your death wish as u injest, Bullets that equal blood spillage/
When I stretch lines I wreck minds, u best check Lines and not cross/
Call them request lines, the call collect lines, VIP's best time, I'm the boss/
I'm the Pimp... you just a ho... Ready to get ripped in battle/
You fuckin' trick... This K-MO.. Ready to get branded like cattle?/
Get up lazy bitch... This Paseo... Ever been blazed from the saddle/
Pot dynasty spit... Scared.. then say so... go back to the crib with the rattle/

yeah!!


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HOAR!!!

ha ha :laugh: wasting a verse pimp they aint gonna battle

I know.. but I had to get my diss in...lmao


It would go to waste anyway cuz I'm an idiot!

this is honest feed back you were not bad heres what i rate you
wordplay:6/10
punches:8/10
flow:5/10
overall:7
thats good shit man

lol... yeah... I don't care about wordplay and complex rhymes...lol... unless I'm battling someone and need it. The flow was a lil' fucked up...oh well.

villagepimp this was nice so let me drop a diss verse in here

Look my blend bolder because I win over cats
But you fall fast like tall grass while I shoulder gats
Got marked rhymes because my art blind make you
Fart wine so don’t start crime your lyrics like fake stew
No taste your flow waste like poured iodized salts on sidewalks
Diminish a wretch like a finished sketch draws pictures in bulk
With raw scriptures and chalk, discover the corrupt then cover
It up like dogs do bones leave you in the fog alone like no other

wtf? no.

:laugh:

OWNED

both... Madrapper & Franchise


in the same thread

^^^thats my boy :laugh: