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Scriptive vs * stonez *
Battle Rules:
6 -10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting no feeding Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-13-04 at 11:00 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
* Stonez * has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 11:01 AM.
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Scriptive has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 11:01 AM.
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[color=RoyalBlue] [B] Yo i do wanna clap back hope to get a moment of Silence [color] [b]And yea im makein u think twice like the time u Battled Verbal Violence U Lost 5-0 u kno im makin a Repeat Dogg Cause i kno fa sure u mo under ground than a Ground Hogg Ur Shitz Garbage why u still thinkin u tha great U Hittin in spanish no wonder ur punches aint Relate Well i gotz to go before i ripp u apart nigga And i make u firgue how i pull the trigga but i did kill this Wigga |
Yo i do wanna clap back hope to get a moment of Silence And yea im makein u think twice like the time u Battled Verbal Violence U Lost 5-0 u kno im makin a Repeat Dogg Cause i kno fa sure u mo under ground than a Ground Hogg Ur Shitz Garbage why u still thinkin u tha great U Hittin in spanish no wonder ur punches aint Relate Well i gotz to go before i ripp u apart nigga And i make u firgue how i pull the trigga but i did kill this Wigga |
ok look,
your entering the resticted *zone*, i love to throw *stonez* to break away your *bones* be like shaun diddy *combs* its the *s* the *c* the *r* the *i* the *p* its *scriptive*, my rhymes *encrypted*, your line *predicted*, Crimes *enflicted* people being *addicted* im the best people can't match my superior *skill* ill make you *shrill* im giving you *thrills* Leaving *spills* of blood all over the *sills* stonez has been murderd once again he's *lucky* he's a vampire he lucky he dint get slayed by *buffy* |
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Voted For: Scriptive
omg scrip that was horrible what are you thinking quoting a puffy line??!!!no no no!!!!still your punches and verse was better then stones verse that made 0 sense and aint hit no punches or even try no personals yall both need to elevate please |
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This was feedback posted for Scriptive
The Anne Klein sportin coke, snortin niggaz lovely
I keep my pussy fresh like Dudley; watch the show as my flow bubble over like Mo's and Cristal's Ain't scared to bust my pist-al, sippin hard on Cristal Dream accounts, large amounts Cause Frank don't play with lai money, get high money Ready to die Grady, no if's, and's, or maybe's I'm not your average lady; put that on my 380 Me and my bitch catch flights to Texas Niggas call us Crystal and Alexis Bump into some hoes that be in Houston boostin Trunk full of Donna Karan in the rental LeBaron Uh, who us? We just swervin, in the dark blue Suburban Drinking Bourbon, with Heinekens for the chaser Police'll never chase us we too fly for that Processed and fingerprinted we too dime for that I be, flirtin for certain, wearin short skirts and but ain't no dicks insertin see, that's the difference between me and other bitches, they fuck to get they riches I fuck to bust a nut, brianna not a slut I gotta reputation to look out for Plus my boss is a outlaw |
Voted For: * Stonez *
damn i dont think this is stonez but he flipped it hard |
Voted For: * Stonez *
Stonez Took This Due To The Fact His Was More Of A Battle Verse.. Scriptive Was More Of A Song... Not Really A Hot Battle HEre.. Both Elevate With Creativity and Punches Vote - Stonez ~R~ |
Voted For: Scriptive
this was a one side battle...... scriptive took this hands down..both verse wasn't that great but worth trying to elevate |
Voted For: * Stonez *
my vote goes to Def Jamz is becuz he had good punchlines...and that he kept landin' Scriptive wit them punches..Scriptive yo verse was ok...just get rid of the ( * ) shit...its kinda annoyin'..even tho u had some multi's in there...keep elevatin'...both of you... vote- Def Jamz |
Voted For: Scriptive
scriptive wins this battle because of the multies even tho there not that important to me,punches win a battle for me. But the multies were pretty good n overall flow was ight NEED TO ELEVATE ON THOSE PUNCHES tho lol u took this tho Def Jamz not really on point wit punches or rhymin its too basic holla at me http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142845 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142873 |
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