OGfromPawtucket vs MARVOLoUsJ1009
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OGfromPawtucket has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 12:13 PM.
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MARVOLoUsJ1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 12:16 PM.
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Your spittin second cuz i told you what to do
i'm in total control of yo mind, body and how you eat yo food Ima noob i ain't ashamed to say it my shitz hardcore if yours is too don't be afraid to lay it but if you comin up soft like i think you will dont even post cuz i already took your place on the bill for real you don't even understand my shit but other people hear it and they have a fit I can't believe you try and battle me The key to you gettin better is listen to me |
u dont know my whole-fam-real,ya moms i could make da hoe-stand-still // "security system"? nah but i'll pull my gun "fast" n make dis "slow-man-shield".....*1 bar*
dis fagget calls his self a og but is dis kidd a crook? naw... they all "candy" so dont get madd when ppl "miss da good bar" (mr.good bar) i dont think ya rappin is hott,b f rap when im grabbin da glock // & just happen da pop,i'll take da suit u buried in i dont "toy" around u can get "jacked in a box"... my squad is trife,they use da sharpest knife or spark ya life... should make ya s/n "wisdom-tooth" u think its "smart da bite" 8 lines fukk it |
Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009
OGfromPawtucket - u got murked (not to be mean)...u admitted to being a newb.....ur flow wasn't as good....not multiz.....hardly n e punches (and they were weak)....uhhh not a good spit...u cant talk about how he eats his food...thaz irrelevant....ur spit consited of a bunch of set-up lines MARVOLoUsJ1009 - nice spit....u had him tha whole tyme....after tha first line i was thinkin "okay this is over"....nice multiz....although in tha first bar u were a lil off wit tha sec. system/shield line....that was kinda wack....btu overall u took it...keep spittin and getting better....and that closer was pretty good but try not to talk about guns n shyt so much v/ MARVOLoUsJ1009 by tha way yall should vote on my battle which tha link can be found in my sig thanx and good luck to bof of ya |
This was feedback posted for MARVOLoUsJ1009
nigga u chat shit u make no sense son u as wack as e looch... Damn NUCCA Ur wack ass lines gt me burried on the floor u have to do " " t show your punches nucca quit rap now
BUT OOOH SHIT OG U AS WACK AS FUCK I CANT STAND IT U BOTH WACK BUT MARV IS LESS WACK COS HE HAD PUNCHES WITH SHIIT FLOW AND NO MULTI s |
^^^^?????? wow i feel da hate u fukkin dickhead y u on looch meat nigga...he merked u and u change ya name lmaooo
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nucca shut the fuck up NUCCA u as wack fuck... LOOK aT YOUR CRAP lines looooool i merk you blind folded now shu it
i dont think ya rappin is hott,b f rap when im grabbin da glock // & just happen da pop,i'll take da suit u buried in i dont "toy" around u can get "jacked in a box"... LOOOOOOOOOOl look at this nucca lines liek he talking not flowing "JACKED IN A BOX" WACK! |
dogg who r u ??? lmaoooo whut u freepostin so u can get ya post count up so u could vote on a battle dat whole shit flowed dunny
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Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009
Yo this was a One-Sided battle, Holy fuck, a newb battling a Vet.. This place never changes, oh well, anyway, need i even explain why Marv Took it, Peace |
okay uppin 4more votes i just voted on madd shit so i expect niggaz 2 return da fukkin favor's
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Voted For: OGfromPawtucket
og had a better flow and some wordplay i was feelin both but ima have to say og |
???? dogg how da fukk ya vote got like 60 letter's all u gota do is explain it...and u must dont nkow whut wordplay is aneway im up 2-0 only explained fukin votes
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stop bein a little bitch dammit, he beat u i fuckin hate losers like u
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