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DRAG~ON 08-10-04 01:41 PM

DRAG~ON vs r.i.p
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 08-13-04 at 01:41 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 08-10-04 01:44 PM

DRAG~ON has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 01:44 PM.

System 08-10-04 01:52 PM

r.i.p has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 01:52 PM.

r.i.p 08-10-04 02:01 PM

fuck if we fought /// put yo brains on the wall so every body can know your thoughts///
what you think they call me rip for nothing/// his name drag-on what he bitch or something///im like bush push ill push the botton///my rymes have you like steve wandering
how your career crumbreling and fuck his clips///he breath could be hot as piss and his shit still wouldn't spit flames and shit///and fuck if i go to hell i seen better bars in jail///and fuck the worst i wanted you to spit first cause like a bitch /ladys firsts///a this cat a dummy he could be baby and he still woundn't have cash money///fuck the truth i need a bucket of ice when i leave booth(too hot)//so put
this cat in a I just hit him with me car now his body drag-on/keep a outsider just cause his name drag-on he not a ruff ryder


drag on is a part of ruff riders if you didn’t get the last line

DRAG~ON 08-10-04 02:20 PM

REST.IN.PEACE. motafucker..more like
pieces
call em reese cuz his rhymes..no wrong
way 2 eat diss

im 2 fast like BOOST mobile i ask where u
at...
den pull out my 9's shot NINE times 2 fuckin
kill diss CAT

wut can say its...E Z breezy like a COVER GIRL
but makeup cant help his fuckin rhymes so 2
cover diss bitch i'll hurl...

n u gone have 2 another account after diss
again
cuz my lyrics flow like toilet water so u get
shit on again

wit no problem cuz i got da answer like im
IVERSON
but we gone call yo ass RIDDLER cuz ya
rhymes r ? questioned

but can't answered cuz dey garbage...
need 2 be n da trash
now i feel bad cuz HAMBURGER HELPER
couldn't HELP yo ass

B-MAC 08-10-04 02:39 PM

Voted For: DRAG~ON

fuck if we fought /// put yo brains on the wall so every body can know your thoughts///

Filler, Nothing Else to it 1/5

what you think they call me rip for nothing/// his name drag-on what he bitch or something///im like bush push ill push the botton///my rymes have you like steve wandering

All this is weak!!! 1.5/5

how your career crumbreling and fuck his clips///he breath could be hot as piss and his shit still wouldn't spit flames and shit///and fuck if i go to hell i seen better bars in jail///

This is all Played as fuck, Get Orginal 1/5

and fuck the worst i wanted you to spit first cause like a bitch /ladys firsts///

Yo i just voted on a battle, and saw the Exact Line.. .5/5
I ant saying shit, but, Betta not be biting

a this cat a dummy he could be baby and he still woundn't have cash money///fuck the truth i need a bucket of ice when i leave booth(too hot)//

Wank.. Filler 1/5

so put
this cat in a I just hit him with me car now his body drag-on/keep a outsider just cause his name drag-on he not a ruff ryder

It was ok, but still really weak1.5/5

6.5/30....

Yo i no thats a Low rate, but dude, yah lines were played, and there was no orginality, No punches Barely, and ones that you did have were weak as Fuck, and yah Structure, was soo Bad.. it was soo fucken hard to read.. No hate man, iam just stating my Opinion!!




REST.IN.PEACE. motafucker..more like
pieces
call em reese cuz his rhymes..no wrong
way 2 eat diss

Good Opener, 3/5

im 2 fast like BOOST mobile i ask where u
at...
den pull out my 9's shot NINE times 2 fuckin
kill diss CAT

Not really feeling this line, Kinda Filler.. 2/5

wut can say its...E Z breezy like a COVER GIRL
but makeup cant help his fuckin rhymes so 2
cover diss bitch i'll hurl...

Na.. I could see where you were going, Should have Re-Worded it 1.5/5

n u gone have 2 another account after diss
again
cuz my lyrics flow like toilet water so u get
shit on again

lol.. I liked this One... Hot.. 5/5

wit no problem cuz i got da answer like im
IVERSON
but we gone call yo ass RIDDLER cuz ya
rhymes r ? questioned

Ok.... 2.5/5

but can't answered cuz dey garbage...
need 2 be n da trash
now i feel bad cuz HAMBURGER HELPER
couldn't HELP yo ass

Bad Closer.. 2/5

16/30


Aight this was a Aight Verse, Some of the Punches could have been Different, yah structure was good, and yah Flow was all aight...

Vote Goes to Drag!!!!!!



Return the Fav Guys... !!!!!!!!

r.i.p 08-11-04 08:10 AM

wordman rip (rest in piss)

r.i.p 08-11-04 08:53 AM

uppin for votes hit me up drop a link

Definate Fully 08-11-04 09:02 AM

Voted For: DRAG~ON

lmfao man DRAG~ON's verse was funny as hell man but sum parts i dont get but i like ur punches man funny...
ur structure was good and i cud read the rhymes... R.I.P ur structure was crap man dunno when ur rhyming
no hate

return an honost vote yall in my sig wit Westoaklanekillah

DRAG~ON 08-11-04 12:01 PM

thanx 4 a votes
vote 4 sum of my other
battles 2 dey gettin slept on
upppin 4 voootttes

r.i.p 08-12-04 08:15 AM

uppin for votes com,n stop sleepen on this shit

Wite Warrior 08-12-04 11:22 AM

Voted For: DRAG~ON

For:R.I.P
Betta ryhmin and structure and personalz
Drag on rhymez werent as hard and his structure was okay close battle
Return tha favor
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Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Wite Warrior 08-12-04 11:24 AM

Wot Da Fuk I Voted 4 R.i.p Fukin Wrong Wid Dis Shitface

Wite Warrior 08-12-04 11:24 AM

Vote 4 :r.i.p
Betta Rhymez And Betta Structure
Close Battle

DRAG~ON 08-12-04 12:46 PM

ya vote probably went 2
me kuz every 1 its a dick ride
vote
upppin 4 votes


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