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spittinrhymes4u vs ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
Battle Rules:
10 lines max 3-0 is ko spit 30 min afta check in No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting topic: Dad died Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-10-04 at 04:46 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. Win by 3-0 KO |
spittinrhymes4u has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 04:17 PM.
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..::iNgEnIuS mInD::.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 04:27 PM.
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Topic: dad died Somethin happend in mah life, somethin thats really horrible... Mah dad died, his place in this world is unrestorable... But i hate my self, for the way he had to leave the way he left.... Damn if i had one wish, it would be dat i could destroy death... You know every sunday im the only one that goes to ur grave... Cuz i can't help that every day in mah mind i always see ur face... You should see how lonely mom is now that you are gone forever.... I wish you'd only keep your promise, dat u n mom is always together... But im here dad! Im alone, u sed u'll always help me n i believed u... But why did you have to leave at this time wen i really need you... |
daymn mah dad just died and i cant help but cry
shiht it hurts so much that mah heart must be fried and tied fuck this aint happenin i only get one father and right now i had a good job on being a fucker i didnt took care of him when he was still here in this earth that when he first saw me breath and took care im laughin and cryin at the same time cuz im such a moron smokin crack while mah father lies down in the coffin im feelin high now but dont care about the weed im smokin look at mah dad lyin there wid a glass coverin him in that fuckin box that was made by a machine |
uppin..hahaha...u from the bay area also...good luck
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This was feedback posted for spittinrhymes4u
yall really suck at topicals do this in open mic and elevate then battle dont do it here.
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lol...dis nigga sed i suck???^^^hahaha...lets battle in a topical battle then...then lest see wut u'll say after i kill u
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Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
Nice dropz by both. Mind had dis though. His hsit was a lil deeper. Wordplay was better sow was structurre. Was really feelin both. Spittin ok flow last linee was strectched as fuck. STructure ok words kinda basic. Nice drops to both.Feelin it V/ Ingenious mind. vote on dis http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141254 |
Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
those were both cool but ingenois gets mine it... taht was rill nice u should continue off dat and drop it at open mic or sumfin my votes to ingenios cuz his was better flow and opener and close no hate ur still was good tho spit but his was better |
Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
ingenius shit flowed better and everything rhymed when spittin didn't even rhyme his last line ingenius your structure was bomb ingenius, yours was alright but much room for improvement |
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uppin
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