d-blue vs PayDay
 

Battle Rules:

10 bars no more...or DQ
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dick Ridin


good luck mane....cause ure gettin murked



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-10-04 at 05:08 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

PayDay has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 04:39 PM.

D-Blue has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 04:40 PM.

Walkin' tall yet stolen profile,
And now your in Hell's court, time for the trial,
Your turn to be tested and bested,
Like I was before I rested,
And took on the brothaz on the current rap scence,
Kickin' madd whackness yet clockin' madd green,
U made a big mistake tryin 2 freestyle D
ur a 20 year old n styll havent lost his virginity
Imma end dis battle like dis
eitha u'z da bytch or imma make ur forfeit

Send a hurse, this shit get worse, this gon' end wit drama
local nerves glocken on perv's then she kills yo momma

He be rappin, they bout ta cap em, cant nobody stand him
Still got half of his homies head that I wanna hand him

Fuck the judge, I hold a grudge, im a flint thug…(bitch)
Me and my niggas, the only thing we know is to go for the blood

I hang hoes, wanna tangle for that cash
I blast and mash the gas, droppin like my ashes

get past this, ho style wicked nigga with fashion
you see my pashion, is rippin the microphones and outlastin…(ule never beat me)

ill cast them bitch ass niggaz leave em as has been's…(u a never was)
closed caskets, mind blowin like head gaskets

shit'll get drastic, wrappin niggaz bodies in plastic
no need for askin, get to bustin on them bastards

I be that gangsta like??? steadily hittin you with a double barrel
See shit like a sparrow and I shoot you like a bow and arrow…(Ruthless)

Cruisin down your block in my big suburbian blazer
Boxin like Joe Frazier, leavin cuts on ure face wit a dull razor…(Bloody mess)


PaYDays out to damage ya aimin this shit at your temple
Bustin you like a pimple, takin your shit is so simple…(no challenge)

uppin for some votes.....................................

Voted For: D-Blue

im given it to d-blue, i like his flow structure and rhyme sceme
he had the wordplay and metaphors and creativity, payday, you had the punches and the personels, but blue had a better opener and ending, so ima give it to blue

uppin for honest votes...and remember battles aint about flow....the about personals and punches...

Voted For: PayDay

Yo pretty weak but pay day got dis. He came a lil harda. Some linez was like wtf an coulda been worded better but you had some good wordplay. D-blue i seen better from you...very weak shit but keep elvatin. Fix your structure your shit was too short. Keep elevatin 2 both. V/payday

vote on dis

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Voted For: D-Blue

i vote for D cos his verse had tighter punches and his shit wasnt streched....thought u gatta work on ur structure...he had better metaz and good personald...the other dude was stretching his shit..but his tructure was better...this battle wasnt that hot but i vote for D-blue...

uppin for more votes....and the battle was supposed to be 10 bars not 10 lines...so my shit wasnt streched...lets get some honest votes up in here....

Voted For: PayDay

my vote goes to PayDay/ his structure was good/had alot more personals/ d had an aight verse but it wasnt good enough/ you both need to elevate/ so my vote goes to PayDay

Voted For: PayDay

hey i think u won u had better overall verses. your punches hit harder your flow was better just overall its was better.

Voted For: PayDay

Pay Day obviously takes this, she had punches that actually hit, and every bar she had was better then d blues whole verse, and she had many more bars than D. Pay you still need some serious elevation, your lines were simple and somewhat played, and you were tryin to be gansta, which you weren't. But since D was just horrible and lacked everything that you had, you get my vote

uppin for votes....and i am a guy mane...lol...wats wit people callin me a girl....damn