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..::ingenius mind::.. vs shadow
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shadow has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 10:17 PM.
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..::iNgEnIuS mInD::.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-10-04 10:20 PM.
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ur not ingenius..post ur verse in lime green it still wont be bright.... as a matter of a fact..ur aint original..dawg ur known-to-bite... you love to bite..i guess that why ur brother got a bloody peenus... ill do a brain switch wit u and albert..ur mind still wont be genius... ill smack ur phillpino face off the floor..juss to watch tha blood spill... inject you with cancer aids and anthrax..son you still wont be ill... im a tree..u cant match up to me..your just a tooth pick or splinter... ..i ll add 300 pnds 2 u..but ur a still not or will evr be a heavy hitter... u under estimate a rapverse vet..leave..son u aint wanted here... wasnt tryin hard..greater then i appear..got back to rb..... ..........take a hint..rapverse wants u to leave..Queer........ |
I could only use two lines, n nigga i swear i'll end you...
Shyt, i bet shrek can get better women then you do... I gotta lot more shyt ta say, but u know them i shouldn't mention.... If michael n usher could do it, you wack, at least say one ''confession...'' Iight, bein white n can't rap, that fareal i could actually understand... but why did you cheat in RV? Arn't u a Vet, Y did u get banned??... shyt, if bein bad was good, i guess william hung could actually sing... wait, if bein bad was good, i guess you'd actually be a basket ball ''KING" I've seen to many white weak emcee's, seein one dats good has been a while... But damn dawg, jst give up, no luck 4 u here so take ur ass back to 8 mile... 1.) Iight, bein white n can't rap, that fareal i could actually understand... but why did you cheat in RV? Arn't u a Vet, Y did u get banned??... look at his name!!! look at his IP adress also.... 2.) I've seen to many white weak emcee's, seein one dats good has been a while... But damn dawg, jst give up, no luck 4 u here so take ur ass back to 8 mile... look how bad his freaken spit iz... i ain't bein races...dis is jst a battle!!! |
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Voted For: shadow
stretched verse but definitely better on all levels... some wordplay and metas were forced but it was still enough to get the win... iN... had like one personal but he set it up all wrong... everything else seemed filler.. ya still got some elevatin to do... shadow, don't get hype... a so-called "vet" shoulda spit way better than that |
bitch shut the fuck up, he'll still woop ur ass ne day...
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Voted For: shadow
I could only use two lines, n nigga i swear i'll end you... Shyt, i bet shrek can get better women then you do... 4/10 I gotta lot more shyt ta say, but u know them i shouldn't mention.... If michael n usher could do it, you wack, at least say one ''confession...'' 4/10 Iight, bein white n can't rap, that fareal i could actually understand... but why did you cheat in RV? Arn't u a Vet, Y did u get banned??... 5/10 shyt, if bein bad was good, i guess william hung could actually sing... wait, if bein bad was good, i guess you'd actually be a basket ball ''KING" 4/10 I've seen to many white weak emcee's, seein one dats good has been a while... But damn dawg, jst give up, no luck 4 u here so take ur ass back to 8 mile... 4/10 ur not ingenius..post ur verse in lime green it still wont be bright.... as a matter of a fact..ur aint original..dawg ur known-to-bite... 6/10 you love to bite..i guess that why ur brother got a bloody peenus... ill do a brain switch wit u and albert..ur mind still wont be genius... 6/10~~Played punch ill smack ur phillpino face off the floor..juss to watch tha blood spill... inject you with cancer aids and anthrax..son you still wont be ill... 5/10 im a tree..u cant match up to me..your just a tooth pick or splinter... ..i ll add 300 pnds 2 u..but ur a still not or will evr be a heavy hitter... 6/10 u under estimate a rapverse vet..leave..son u aint wanted here... wasnt tryin hard..greater then i appear..got back to rb..... ..........take a hint..rapverse wants u to leave..Queer........ 6/10 wasent a great battle the punches on both sides were hella played and the wordplay was weak and simple and the structure was bout the best thing you both had going in this battle the punches could have been harder and the wordplay and complexity could have been better but in my eyes shadow got this hands down |
This was feedback posted for ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
can't vote jus checkin it out..............................
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Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
Close batttle i agree but i vote... Shadow: yours was very goosd and it was close you had some good punches and personals and your structure and flow is iight but you had played rhymes but your good I mind: um your shit was iight and it was good but i was expecting a topical... your was more hard hiting and i found it funny also you had ok strcutre and flow Vote is Imind for a better verse |
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