$ Wordman $ vs r.i.p
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-11-04 at 11:50 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

are you going to spit first or what?.. You called me out.. Fucker

r.i.p has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 09:14 AM.

I'll slash-ur-knees, mutilate ur back-n-spleen, to leave u lookin' like sum1 managed to hack-ur-genes//
Ur rhymes couldn't shine, even if u waxed-them-clean, u couldn't hit if i gave u a bat and let u whack-extreme//
Call me raps cairopracter, when i make ur back-look-lean, crossdressing earned u the right 2 where a sash-4-queen//
U couldn't be ill, even if u had aids then bashed-ur-meat, if u rapped visuals ur rhymes wud luk like plaque attacking-teeth//
I'll silence ur words, like sum1 cracked-ur-speech, so even competing with helen keller wud be a master-feat//
Ur verse is so wack, that it's requested-slaps, the only way u'd ever @#%$ me up is if u molested-rap//
U couldn't bring illness, if ur rhyme had infected-rats, lets see how u hold a mic with ur arms-twisted-back//
You'll never score, too many concepts in my words, i surround ya stereo types,you mono spitten ya cursed verse
Rap is like a race, I cruise by while I meditate, you gassed yourself up and you still can't accelerate
u an ILLITERATE BASTARD, your style aint even mastered, my @#%$ be spirtually blessed so you could say im pastured
Beating Xtra 2restrial is harder than climbing MT Everest, I'll Pop all pimples on ya head and make u drink the puss as a beverage
I verbalize paranormally while they holds battles in anticipation, gazing skyward as i descend from the clouds, buring spirit like acidic precipitation
I’ll break ur hands, causing ur writtens to seem kinda weak, and steal ur tonsils so u can easily swallow this defeat
Then circumvent ur weak tactics, keeping u dazed like hypnosis, then watch u crumble like cookies and divide like mitosis
Cursive-assertiveness, my verses-are-merciless, and my rhymes are tighter than a virgins-perked-cervix-is
This battle is wrong, like snow falling in a hundred degrees, cause this guy's win record is shorter than a midget down on his knees

$ Wordman $ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 09:41 AM.

Wanna Battle Me? Obvious you a Newb Telling me to Rest in Piss(lol)
This is Like a masscare of MAd caddle, Reminise on This Diss!
Ripping Newbs Like you To shreddes, Not Worthy of a Pink Slip
Wit My powerFul Text, I Make Sure Egos, Slip!
Ya Text n Audio Record look a little bare and Plain
Couldnt Rise Above me if yah was elevating higher then David Blane!!
Like Ja Said here comes the Reigh
Da closest you come to a gurl is smoking mary Jane
after this Battle, Celebrate with a smoke, Not worthy of Champagne



Lol... Ok i know that was fucken weak as hell, but W/e.. iam at work..

Yo this Cat is a Mad Fucken Biter.. Look at his Older shit, like he Made that yesterday.. liek he elevated that Much in one day... W/e.... Fuck i hate Pre-Writters.. i have not Pre writted since i started this this..

bitch i been on here dumass old name thegreat , stared over now he on my dick cause he cant fuck with me bitch uppin

why you on my dick so hard , this guy keep pm me talking about im a bitter from a nother or its pre written he suck yall wont a verse to show yall he not fuckin with me here


my inventions of tention and powerful progression,
it's time, for sick rhymes, lunatic lines,
hit your mind like in someones strict-nine,//
for all the shells, clips and glocks,
you step to me with a weapon,
you'll be reppin' your click in a box//

i toss punches like Muhammad Ali and ya jaw get locked like parkinsons disease //
You made a thread lookin for a battle but i bet you aint expect me to answer it //
im sick and cancerous and my flows put u in more 'distress' than a fairytale damsel is //
Get lit like a candlewick, you fucked with the wrong vet get chopped in seconds //
Rock dis wreckless in this battle im similar to a vampire how i stop reflextion //
Your wacker than wack i dont see why you bother to rap you need to quit yappin ya trap //
Call it a sack cuz my flows tackle you back, & u cant win dawg.. its practice you lack//
Hackin ya mac destroying with silence, im so sick text dat im writin gives ya pc a virus //
Entering this battle u wasnt believed to win, cuz i crack up the competition like comedians //
if you seen this kid win it's obvious the 'shit-was-luck' so MET-A-4'll have you like kid's without NICKLELODEON...'MISSING-GUTS//
KID UR A NEWB IAM SORRY U HAVE TO DIE EARLY CUZ I RIPPED YO STOMACH OPEN AND PULL DA GUTS OUT LOOKIN LIKE DQ ICE CREAM SWIRLYIES// (12) LINES NOW BITCH

Voted For: r.i.p

r.i.p fucking won dat s|-|!t easy
$wordman$ line were shit i think he should dump um in a pit
good on ya r.i.p
u got the votes easy

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

good looking drop a link i got you back still uppin

there is Not One thing in this Whole Fucken Verse, that specifically says anything Towards me.. hahhaha Fucken Pre-Written Fagget.. You gut a Netcee, not a n Emcee..

Voted For: $ Wordman $

WORD keep it simple and short
RIP yo word play is extensive

WORDMANS punchlines did it

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

uppin for votes give his weak ass a nother lose dickrider votes

Voted For: r.i.p

yea i dont know im gone have to throw this at RIP i think Word man is better but your punches connected here so im gone give it to Rip structure was iffey on both n RIP nice punches so yea o yea vote for me vs. wordman ill return the favor kid