DOT vs ShackleS
 

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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

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Check in by: 08-11-04 at 11:23 AM

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ShackleS has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 10:55 AM.

DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 11:01 AM.

~Rippin this cat to shreds..........he dunno "what hit him"~
~Guys a physco battlin me...tha loony bin "will admit him"~

~He should quit right now....before he get's humiliated~
~Rap..stupid bitch raps like he's on tha shitter...constipated~

~Amatur rappers are his thing....whats he doin battlin tha king~
~You tha type of emcee that jus hands out a win~

~You CAN'T tamper wit ma skills they reach infinate, yo's minus.~
~This bitch is dunno shit bout hip~hop, if he had a crew it'd be tha "cheap ass rhymers"~

~Dot, Yeah dot is how small this dude is,straight up~
~Look, no affence but im not bout to lose genst a gay~fuck!~

i know you and you come from a long line of bitches
thats why im leavin you in a long mile of ditches
look imma tell you the truth you aint on my level
im big you small, imma a mountain youz a peeble
what im really tryna tell you is dog youre nothin
you thought you was fo real (Pharrel) you was just frontin
man the name SHACKLES reminds me of a slave ship
ill SHACKLE yo ass all up and make you my slave bitch
imma save my punchlines i felt youre not hard
you softer that plush pillows in a little pink car
so imma stop wit this shit before i get too serious
ill have you leakin all over like you just started yo period

5 mins. thats all i needed

~Rippin this cat to shreds..........he dunno "what hit him"~
~Guys a physco battlin me...tha loony bin "will admit him"~

~He should quit right now....before he get's humiliated~
~Rap..stupid bitch raps like he's on tha shitter...constipated~

~Amatur rappers are his thing....whats he doin battlin tha king~
~You tha type of emcee that jus hands out a win~

~You CAN'T tamper wit ma skills they reach infinate, yo's minus.~
~This bitch is dunno shit bout hip~hop, if he had a crew it'd be tha "cheap ass rhymers"~

~Dot, Yeah dot is how small this dude is,straight up~
~Look, no affence but im not bout to lose genst a gay~fuck!~

uppin this.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ............................................. for votes

This was feedback posted for DOT
 

Nice verse I cant vote yet
but dis is goin to be da first one I vote on

Voted For: DOT

For: Dot
Rhymez were equal but dot woz more personal close battle
return tha favor wite warrior vs lyricalflowz23

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Voted For: DOT

Opener: ShackleS
Closer: Tied
Structure: Dot
Flow: Dot
Punches: Tied
Personals: Dot
Wordplay: ShackleS

Conclusion:

Shackles I liked yah wordPlay, and Some of yah Punches, but yah Structure, was fucked, and the Flow was also Scetchy. Dot, You didnt Really Come That Hard, But yah Had a few Punches in there, and the Personals, and Structure, and Flow were good, and thats why i voted for you, Because of an OVerall Better Verse.. !!!


Not hate.. Just Laying My Opinion..

Return teh Fav, Vote on a BAttle in My Sig.. Peace

come on lets get sum more votes..................................uppin^^^^^^ ^^^^

Yo wite warrior wat kinda vote that yah need to explain ya votes a bit more....anyway uppin this for sumore votes^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

uppin again please need sum votes on this.^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^