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Big Bad Wolf 08-11-04 02:46 PM

Big Bad Wolf vs Wite Warrior
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Max Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No Dik Ridin

Prepare to be slaughtered bitch. :thefinger Ill spit first due in 30 min. :thefinger

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-11-04 at 03:31 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

System 08-11-04 02:48 PM

Wite Warrior has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 02:48 PM.

System 08-11-04 02:49 PM

Big Bad Wolf has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 02:49 PM.

Big Bad Wolf 08-11-04 03:15 PM

Ma rhymes make dis bitch lose train of thought like when da popos come
got em stunned, at a standstill,bulletz ripped his frame an tore his lungs

Dis fag may be white but your not a warrior, you aint been to battle,
rides dik like a saddle, fag,his legz wide open ready to take it vaginal,

Wit ya gay rhymez, yo aint goin no where fast like traffic,
Hes shocked cuz im static,scarred cuz tha wolfs known to kill faggets,

I spit shit datz unseen an unclean, tryin to out wit me dog datz unkeen,
Like me ima fiend, ready to come to england an fuk yo queen

(weak) uppin on dis shit though.

Wite Warrior 08-11-04 03:32 PM

Ill get u caught up in a lyrical twister,
Wont let u c in dis mist-a,
Ull hear my rhymes on da radio,
Even wen u steppin up 2 def row,
So have a go wid dis bangin flow,
Coz im a raw rhymin reaper,
Betta step down coz im da lyrical teacher

Big Bad Wolf 08-11-04 04:08 PM

Uppin 4 some votez on dis shit..will return tha favor.

afropimp 08-11-04 04:11 PM

Voted For: Big Bad Wolf

big bad wofl wins with better punches metas flow and wordplay
wite u need to elevate no hate urs was short and ur rimes were generic wit no punches or persanals but big urs coulda ben bet7ter but u won this one return tha favors peace

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141044
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141273
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141088
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141300
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141317

-..Jono..- 08-11-04 04:15 PM

Voted For: Big Bad Wolf

ight, heres the break down..

Flo- White
Structure- Big
Mets/Personals = Big
Punches- Big

Wite, you didnt do anythin wrong, you kept the flo basic n a "Basic" battle, it would have easilyt took it

Big, jus always comes at every battle at least it shows, bringin his best regardless of status, cus he don ever wanna be upset by not jus tryin once n it showed here, props to both tho

Return with some votes here both of you ight:

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Your waitin on votes anyways, hollah back young'ns

Kayem 08-11-04 05:04 PM

Voted For: Big Bad Wolf

Both verses wern't great but big bad wolf gets this one......

Big Bad wolf...............structure was good.....flowed well....nice multies......punches were good.....and personald decent...

Wite warrior.......structure wasn't as good.....but flow was still good....no multies.....punches weak.... so was tha personals

vote:Big Bad Wolf

Big Bad Wolf 08-11-04 07:31 PM

Uppin 4 votez on dis shit

Cool son 08-11-04 10:01 PM

This was feedback posted for Wite Warrior
 
Dis battle was good
the only problem is that I cant vote yet
Ill be sure to vote on dis one

Big Bad Wolf 08-11-04 11:02 PM

Aiight thanx still uppin 4 tha K.O. on this noob.

KroNuz 08-11-04 11:30 PM

Voted For: Big Bad Wolf

Lmao......

Wite- Verse Was Basic, Structure Was Good But Lines Werent Long Enough, Punches Werent Good, Nothing Was Ok Flow Though

Big Bad- Metaphors Were Ok, Punches Hit Harder, Flow Was Ok, And Structure Was Ight

Punches- Big Bad
Flow- Tie
Wordplay- Niether
Metaphors- Big Bad
Multis- Niether
Originality- Tie
Structure- Wite

Final Vote---Big Bad Wolf

Return Favor With Honest Vote
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HoPe 08-12-04 02:45 AM

Voted For: Big Bad Wolf

lol..dis battle wasn't hard to choose who won...

wire: yo, u really need to elevate, cuz u had punches softer then a baby's ass, literaly, n basicly, all u did was talk about how u gona kill him wen u didn't get close to it...

big: yo, why u battlin dis newb??? u should battle someoe better..forealz u should...ur jst wastin ur rhymes on someone dat won't uppin ur rep at all...iight???

spit: big
flow: big
punch: big
vocab: flow

vote flow


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