sonic vs e-dubz
 

Battle Rules:

10 - 14 Lines
No Crew/dr Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 08-11-04 at 03:29 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

SONIC has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 03:00 PM.

e-dubz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 03:00 PM.

Sonic might think he hot...... but my flows is too cold to handle
in this battle he coming up shorter then gary colman in sandles
about now its clear that Sonic’s a mess..... so im skinning his flesh
as i diminish his text, its apparent by his verses he has no winnin intents
i guess he still believes in the phrase that..... patience brings hope
but eatin ‘chips’ is the closest he could ever come to ‘preen-goals’
ur flow is cold ‘n chilly so everytime u enter in tornaments u blown it
cuz like ‘duncan’ missin a foul shot, u fail at the ‘spur’ of the moment
my papermate commitin date rapes to see yo fate like bein blind in the circus
in other words your a clown and yo body probably would never surface
im a lyrical surgeon, have u searchin fo the perfect verses to match these
now you on other sites seeking to bite niggaz shit like....... attack fleas
so sonic lets just stop it...... cause in no way is you better than me
specially when yo prewrites...... cant match my minute man frees


these boxes for ur verse r mad small.. so it might look stretched

Leave this bitch Lying Still, Slain, Make em Feel Real Pain
E-duz a.k.a Eric Sermon/ The One Who Steals Names
U never will win, u'll die before we put the Final Score In
"U Have D/R" he'll say, yo personals
are more predictable than Free Throws from Micheal Jordan
Droppin hot shit tonight kid, I'm Killin You With Bombs
U'r Whack, yo style is "On & Off" like my Feelings For Ya Mom
I've been called u out, u must know I have the Better Text
Stalled coz ur mo nervous than Clinton on a Lie Detector Test
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140629
And God forbid you rap, your lyrics Stop the Beat
Coz even yo stucture is fucked up, like the Parthenon in Greece

The Parthenone is and archetectual stucture that is off by some degrees, built in Greece..

and Eric Sermons name is E-dubb, meaning he bit his name...

lets get some votes in here

i'll keep it real, yo verse was okay for 15 minutes if it was actually freestyled, coz I couldn't get 14 lines in that quick, so good luck.. i'm a good sport, it's just that you were avoiding the hell out of me, and all i wanted was a battle, but good luck anyway, one..

dawg i dont prewrite..i free wrote that, believe me or not.. good drop fam and i wasnt avoidin u, i jus wasnt on fo awhile.. goodluck
~1~

iight uppin.. 0-1

uppin...leave links and we will rtf

ups

uppin again

no votes?

Voted For: e-dubz

Damn I gotta be honest. Edubz takes this battle. He had some lines that had me weak. I'm likin that duncan line. Originality cuz I've never heard that one yet. I dont think sonic came that hard in this battle. Most lines didnt hit that hard and wasnt really feelin them. The Eric Sermon one was tite, but Edubz takes this with harder punches, and a little bit more creativity.

Vote-Edubz

B]vote edubz[/B]
da boi came wit some killa metas...punches was well done...personals was a lil weak but hit hard enough...structure was streched but you now why...

sonic..
not a bad battle jus not enough..wit a lil more intensity you would of took this..structure was good...punches was okay...personals a lil played but nothin to be ashamed of...keep it up son..next time you probably win