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mc-chrissy-boy vs Maku JaiiLiin
Battle Rules:
6-14 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting post within 2hrs after check in. let's go Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-11-04 at 07:13 PM Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in. |
mc-chrissy-boy has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 06:14 PM.
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Maku JaiiLiin has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 06:15 PM.
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mc-chrissy-boy has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 06:15 PM.
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Im a take this fake mc out, without even~tryin~//
got u on the post~cryin~cause u accepted my~challenge~// i take it u didnt~aknowledge~my ~skillz~, i got u quitin rap and back to doin drug ~dealz~// i got a safe it~consealz~all my flows against any mc, ill take u out~e-z~as counting to ~3~// my rymes are a mid-life ~chrisis~, is this too much for the little baby? so u admit u cant handle ~this?~// im peggin u with one word at a time to this~flow~man im takin this vote and u dont even ~know~// why did i get stuck vsing a ~pussy?~ caught this nigga at the whorehouse-in givin his virginity up too some guys named ~louisy~// then i went around sayin OMG he lost his virginity at the age of ~ten~ too 3 girls That aint ~men~// im not a joke kidd and ill tell u ~again~ and if i get provoked ull see my knuckles meet ur ~chin~// im running this vote like a guy that stole a ~car~//(speedin and lossin cops) so why dont u give up and go back to the gay ~bar~// |
if we even share the same air on the block//
i'll leave ya body lookin nasty, like shoulder lenghth hair on a twat// i want reasons to make ya chest rot// i'll polish and decorate a single bullet and shoot, there i gave you my best shot // your a white parent's problem with kids// yer overactive enactment of black swagger makes you an obvious ritz // Destined for 'L' so just get pissy// it's a date between me, him and the win, and I dismissed chrissy// do not battle me// or i'll leave ya parts out of place, like an employee with a watchless wrist in clock factory// you'll never find an entrance to fame// cuz you couldn't make it, if you coattailed GOD into the game// |
there was a little mishap,
while i was trying to post my verse, rapverse wouldn't load, so i took a loss until, i brought this to the mod's attention, and the battle was reopened. proof, of this battle's validity, and that it has been reopened. |
Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin
Maku took this with better strcture and a few good punches. Chrissy, your whole rhyme style is very simple, and some of your lines didn't even rhyme. But no hate though, you just need some practice...if they don't ban you for biting first. Vote - Maku JaiiLiin Return the favor, honest votes only: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141704 |
Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin
opener - Maku, lol...funny shit man closer - Maku, Very good closer, mc's didnt really go together Personals - Maku, didnt find anything hard in mc's multis - Tie, both had good ones metas - Maku, didnt fine a single one in mc's verse vocab - Maku, without a doubt had better vocab Structure - Maku, mc's was wack Maku: you took this one pretty easily as you can see ^^^. Only thing I would have to say for you to elevate on is structure because some of your lines got awfully short with a long line. Eg. 2nd last bar...one had 4 words, other had 18! but good job man, you got my vote. MC: As for you I think you got some elevating to do. Work on wordplay firstly...use personals and punches that hit harder. A lot of the stuff you rhymed about in your verse werent even true. Eg. you talked about beating him up, being gay, calling him a pussy...etc..ya know? Use real stuff and make them whitty so the readed can laugh at it an shit. Also, I think you gotta clean up your structure a bit son...Compare yours wit Maku's and youll see...yours was hard to follow and I can prolly speak for a few other ppl that feel this way too...anyways im done Win: Maku PLZ DROP WITH AN HONEST VOTE ON MY BATTLE AS I DID FOR YOU...I REALLY GOTTA CLOSE THIS THING... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...496068&posted=1 Peace... |
Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin
i'm gonna go with maku jaiilin but it was close , cuz both of them werent that good but maku had a little more personal punches and used more of a style while chrissy jus added "z"s and "s"s to everything ha but yea both of them need some major work vote // maku :sniper: :shoot: :shoot: turban |
again, my style is stop and go, so when there is only four words, that means, it's just four words then pause, it's a common battle style, but if you aren't check out some of jadakiss's stuff, or even ness lee at
http://ness.dmusic.com/ |
uppin on this one, by the way.....................
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Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin
Maku took it.. chrissy rhymes but no real punches were there... flow-none u guys need to fix ya structure.. fo u can flow better punches- Maku creativity-Maku v/ maku maku... why did u set like a 6 day deadline in our battle i dropped 4o min alter.... u should drop ya verse... return the favor on my kid charlemagne battle... |
uppin on this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin
ok: maku: wow you got some fya behind your words boi, nice flow and structure, funny opener, nice name diss, and overall strong punches, your last lines were the best though, nice job mc-chrissy-boy:you had some good punches too, but not as strong as as well worded as maku vote: maku Return the fav, fluidmoon vs. magic in frontlines, thx |
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