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wite warrior vs Decree Wun
Battle Rules:
10 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting no feeding Minimum posts to vote: 300 Check in by: 08-11-04 at 07:00 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Wite Warrior has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 06:32 PM.
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Decree Wun has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 06:32 PM.
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Wite Warrior comin down like snow/bringin rhymes ice cold like moscow/turn da beat up as u walk 2 def row/u betta let dese dickheadz kno/im gonna put on a live sho/decree wun betta run/b4 i fry up like da sun/dis shitz just fo fun/just like yo mum/wen u on top she weigh a ton/fat ass bitch burst my lung/U just a gay fag/C ur mum in a porno mag/couldnt fit on 1 so da page was double/She walk up to McDonalds and dey like shit we in trouble/Shakin da shit up and leavin u in da rubble.
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Similar To a birdkeeper, hit this kid with dessert "eagles" and "hawks"
Damage Your Teeth So We can both discover how cavemen talk fuck Push-ups, Lines'll Pump up your chest more then Pamela's Titties With a horrible name like that we could already tell you Bad, boy like p.diddy Successful lyricist? Nope? kid can't even get his name correct (name) Your Elevation, Jammed like traffic, Mines Risin to the top like a kid 'bout to erect Flip the script..this warriors out of place like martin lawrence in "black night" Kid Get real, you claim your lyrics shinin' but its not visible like black lights You Aint makin sound, this all mus' be going to your system Like headphones Spittin Cyclones, like hopeless peasants you'll never take my thrown |
Voted For: Decree Wun
Wite- Simplistic Verse, Didnt Like Your Structure, Had Ok Metaphor Here And There, Flow Was Ok, And Punches Didnt Hit harder Decree- Punches Were Ok, Metaphors And Wordplay Was Ight, Structure Was Better And Flow Was Decent Punches- Decree Flow- Tie Metaphors-Tie Wordplay- Decree Originality- Tie Structure- Decree Final Vote----Decree Wun Return Favor With Honest Vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140771 |
uppin this.............................................. .
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Voted For: Decree Wun
gotta give this ta wun he had better structure n punches although the punches seemerd kinda weak you at least has some ....wite//this fucked your flow n you had no structure in your verse no punches ,not a nice verse....this battle was really 1/sided.... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141117 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140239 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1480054 |
This was feedback posted for Decree Wun
decree good flow and struture ok punches they could be better and you had some good disses6/10
wite your struture is horrible and your punches and disses completly missed plus you need vocab fo real wite your verse was way to weak to stand up to decree |
This was feedback posted for Wite Warrior
NICE BATTLE
sorry I cant vote yet but when I can Ill vote on urs http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137643 ^ ^^ ^ ^ ^ ^ |
uppin this dawg ill rtf fo sho.............................
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Voted For: Decree Wun
ok battle Decree one: damn i loved ya shit that was tite all were iether nice punches or goood personals you MERKED this guy Wite warrior: you need elevating but props for not complaining whenever your losing a battle vote: yup |
This was feedback posted for Wite Warrior
Change Your Structure Bro, It Needs Some Fixing. Make Lines With Your Verses, Kinda Makes The Flow Better.
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Voted For: Decree Wun
My vote here goes to Decree. He had better structure, good punches, some nice worplay and multis also. Wite Warrior's rhymes were too simple, and didn't really seem directed at Decree all that much. No hate though... Vote - Decree Wun Return the favor y'all, honest votes only: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141704 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=142260 |
Voted For: Decree Wun
Decree Wun..got this one..his punches was harder than Wite Warrior's..the structure was in place..the flow was good..the vocab was aight..and not hard to read it..and the wordplay was ok...so my vote goes to Decree since he had harder punches..and basicly everything... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143245 ^ReTuRn ThA fAvOr |
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