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Klassic 08-12-04 01:44 AM

Proper Intro To $LXDiesel
 
[Man who the fuck is this $lXdiesel man, what the fuck is his problem, fuck he aint gonna fuck wit me, i dotn even fuckin know who he is, NIGGA FUCK YOU]

Nigga fuck you too, whatcha gonna do about me
I ma ran cirlces while you stand around me?
I be that nigga to lova lova, and be loved by them
But i aint in it for the love, but to be fucked by them
Im filthy from the north, filthier then see your grandperents sex each other
i be the one to fuck them bitches, and the one to always love another
then the one you with
man this is north's filth

[Man fuck you $LX wut the fuck you here for, get the fuck out, man you garbage]

Yeah boy run dat game
and when ya ask me for a favor, ya can curse ma name
cuz i aint givin shit to faggots who will never come out
cause they afraid when they rap they will be victims of rout
now that i finally got this fame niggas be steppin
on me like i just woke and this bullshit just happened
its like i didnt work out on the streets every day now
its like i owe you for some shit, shit come on now

[Man Diesel fuck you you aint sellin no keys nad even though ya got some money and some shyne on your ass, its STILL MA BLOCK GET OUT before...]

before wut, im tyred of them niggas that say the would have get up if
eh..umm...khkhmm...ah just shutthefu, shuthefu, shutthefuck up
they think its them who've done work and we just got to snappin
but it is like i said, this shit didnt just happen
it took some work and some time and some pain on the top
to see your close one and homeboys die on the block
so i be that nigga named Diesel steepin it up
SHUTHTEFU SHUTTHEFU SHUT THE FUCK UP

Klassic 08-12-04 01:46 AM

aight uppin for feed back

Klassic 08-12-04 02:10 AM

yo peep this

G_$peed 08-12-04 02:35 AM

nice shit man

Klassic 08-12-04 06:33 PM

uppin for feed back ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

LilKay 08-12-04 07:38 PM

not bad...coulda had stronger vocab...but it was decent

Klassic 08-12-04 10:40 PM

^^^^ uppin for feed back

Klassic 08-13-04 05:30 AM

still uppin ^^^^^

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. 08-13-04 05:54 AM

ya your shit was good 6/10 flow:4/10 punches 7/10 wordplay 5/10
you shuld work on vocab you didnt have to much rhymes in there but you had some good ones ight

Klassic 08-13-04 04:04 PM

aight thatks for feed back, ill work on ma vocab, its a work in progress. Uppin for more.

FLooZe 08-13-04 05:01 PM

this was average.I didnt like some parts of it but it had ok vocab but sketchy flow.5/10


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