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Mentalist 08-12-04 01:49 AM

Just a quickie
 
holla at ya boi

thanks bitches for holdin my pen
i'll cut ur arm off leav u out on a limb
niggaz here gettin out of my order
leavin floatin in bodies off n water
leave niggaz missin ya legz hoppin wit walkers
son ur father yo mama my daughter
im out wit the quarters
ya messin my money up i thought i just taught ya
straight evil takin it bak to the torture
yall all bitches runnin wit porkers (police
holy shit batman i go sumthin here forya
its ya mom in the bathroom she got caught on he voyeur
i got lil niggaz in the street just waitin to offya

G_$peed 08-12-04 03:52 PM

structure needs work

G_$peed 08-12-04 03:53 PM

oh so does rhyming

Femcee4Lyf 08-13-04 12:59 AM

dat shti needs work reread it and change that shit work on the ryhmin and the structure, peace 1luv


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