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Decree Wun vs ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
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topic: in math class...wuts on ur mind 20 lines max No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting spit due in 1 hour Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-12-04 at 03:22 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
..::iNgEnIuS mInD::.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 02:53 AM.
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Decree Wun has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 03:11 AM.
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...Many thoughts float around in my Disgusting, yet Intelligent mind...
...Thoughts Of the math equation disturbed by visions of Ms.Johnson, oh so fine... ...Each Math problem i try and figure out, memories Pass through my mind... ...Tryin' To hold Together, Starin' at the clock, Fifteen minutes Till lunch time... ...Math, my worst subject, strugglin' knowin my average was forty five... ...Nine Bullets Subtracted by eight, i guarantee you pac would still be alive... ...Visions Blurry, mind faded,im beginnin to drift off, i easily fall asleep... ...awoken by "ingenius Mind" loud spoken answers, wtf's wrong with this geek... ...eyes red, my heads spinnin, ready to collapse, but forced to keep my eyes open... ...Dozing off, but awoken every time another answer is loudly spoken... ...In The Room Tappin Ms.Johnson...yeah, To bad its a wet dream... ...my Words were accidently spoken out, She would have my neck..so it seemed... ...but instead, she gave me some lead, a pad, and a quick note..it read... ...Decree Wun, Meet me infront of my desk at 3-to-one... ...we can watch the sunset rise, ive never seen one... ...better "fuck" next time, right now im teachin a class... ...*shook my head..read it again, hopin imma get up in dat ass*... ...Better "Luck" next time, right now im teachin a class... ...I sighed in disapointment, Woke Up miserably, lunch time at last... |
topic: in math class...wuts in ur mind Shyt, todays friday n another test for division.... If I only listend, 10 credits i wouldn't be missin... Speakin of listen'n, wit mah friends i shoulda ditched... Cuz all math does in mah life is make it more of a bitch... 12th grade already n still dont know multiplication... Yea im dumb, you should see the rank that im placed in... Out of 200, yea well im ranked number two hundred.... I use to be smart before, i guess mah brain is jst rusted... Damn, why did math exist? i never understood it... 6th grade took an addition test, passing it i jst couldn't... 10 out of 20? is dat passing, wuts the percentage?... Damn, i shoulda listend to da teach, now i regret it... Im confused, don't know wut to do, 20 divided by 2?... mah friend sed it's 10, i really don't think dat is true... I believe its fourty! WAIT? Fuck'n Dick? is dat dividin it?... Im now gettin horny cuz of dis chick, damn mah minds jst shyt... Its a miracle?Jessica Simpson is smart n a beautiful whore???.... but she's only needed to suck dick cuz dats wut she's only usefull for... I give up on dis shyt, cuz imma jst get wasted for mah whole life... Damn, I've been in high skewl for 8 years, no wonder i have no wife... |
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wth??there were no metaphors in his verse?? are u fucken d/r dawg
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Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
i ma give this one 2 inf but both were nice , it hink this one was more connected and shit so yea Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
For:Ingenious Mind Betta rhymin-ok structure-better flow Decree wun-structure betta-rhymin cud of bin betta Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yo ppl..plz explain ur votes
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aahaha mad d/r and ur sayin mine was dr............
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This was feedback posted for ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
Nice drop really feelin it
I liked ur structure punchlines and overall verse TOO bad I cant vote yet but I will be sure to do it |
how the hell am i dick ridin?? i dont even know em??? plus they sed there are fuck'n metaphors in ur shyt wen there isn't ne at all?
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This was feedback posted for ..::iNgEnIuS mInD::..
nice battle ppls
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