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DRAG~ON vs ...God...
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-12-04 at 02:54 PM Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in. |
DRAG~ON has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 02:15 PM.
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...God... has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 02:16 PM.
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u say a names GOD more like DOG
....................................2 me.... kuz originally u BARKIN up da wrong tree..... u flow nasty n not in a good way 2 ......................................bad.... but dont get mad while a wRAP u up n da BAG dawg get GLAD....... wit ten lines i say wut CUS(in)but we aint .......................................da closes of kin n in diss rap game i call u FRANKLIN n ask where have u BEN n u might b GOD SOn but I OWN YOU so i'll leave so fuck dat even BLUE couldn't finda CLUE n den im threw cuz im S.I.C just lik ya avvy n leave u smothered wit L's like mashed potatoes ........................smothered n gravy..................... |
You a joke,kid,Provokin me to raise da bet when I fold ya frame
Think you the shit?I'll "put ya head in ya lap" so you could hold ya brain... You can’t defeat this verse, at most you can rip it off... His rhymes share kinship with his dick, shit they’re both sick and soft... I’ma put this in a way so even you can understand... It ain’t the fact that I post first that give my verse the upper hand... It’s the simple fact of skill, what I am and what you lack... You couldn’t keep the truth real if it was tattered on your back... Get stepped on like tread, scope on your head, fuck Teflon... I’ll be snorting the outline off the sidewalk you’re left on..... quick key good luck |
his aviatar say ~God Son..I Own You~
it also say S.I.C vote on my other battles DRAG~ON VS phatinum(1) votes i need http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138668 ice pick http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138867 DON(topical) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139290 V0cab http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141251 |
i said 10 lines your dq'd on this,sorry
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but i dont care lets get the votes popping in here good luck
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dat is ten lines fool
sum under da other r da same line |
what the fuk a line is not
your a fukin ass hol its suppose to be in one lines : your a fukin ass hole but anyways uppin on this please we need some votes |
Voted For: ...God...
breakdown metas g punches g struc tie vocab g flow drag overal g vote http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141579 |
Voted For: ...God...
...god... - nice drop...good flow, good structure, and good rhymes with some aiight wordplay, nice punches and some good personals... dragon - well man your structures so wack man, your flow was kinda wack as well, you had punches and personals but your basics are all fucked up v/...god... please vote on this battle with an honest vote as i did to yours http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141918 |
Voted For: ...God...
Nice job both of you you guys are good bt ima have to go wit my boi GOD cause his hit harder |
Voted For: ...God...
open: God, very good opener close: God, nice closer...funny shit! personals: Tie, Both had ok personals metas: Tie, both had them punches: God, way harder multis: God, very good multis, especially in closer, great job God: you took this one easly as you can see ^^^ You had great punches and even better multies... Structure was excellent and great vocab, just gotta watch at the end cause the second last line was short and threw it off a little bit, but I loved it all, great stuff... Drag: I think you have some elevatin to do son... you gotta find a better structure first of all because that look just terrible...I donno if its an audio structure or what but its gotta go. Secondly Vocab needs uppin and Multies need uppin. Finally, you gotta throw some harder punches, I wasnt really feelin those, personals were ok tho...nice try man... win: ...God... Please take the time for me, as I do for you... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141105 |
Voted For: ...God...
god- nice verse, a little stretched at some points but u had some nice punches and meta's dragon- i aint feelin ur style, it makes it look choppy and the flow isnt there, u had some iight punches..with a better structure u woulda had a tight verse..no hate v/...god... |
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