lilchiofthachi vs CPFitz14
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 14 Lines
No Crew Votes
Must be two line format
example:
blahbla bhal bahbl ahblahb cars
blahbl ahbal bhalb ha lbjha mars


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-12-04 at 04:23 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

lilchiofthachi has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 03:55 PM.

CPFitz14 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-12-04 03:56 PM.

This is going to be a one sided battle.
Your in the boat but without a paddle.
You think your ghetto? Your not even fly.
Your lyrics are like mase IN MY GLASS EYE.
You arent so fresh, or so clean.
You sound like a little kid tryin to act mean.
The rhymes you slobber are like graffiti.
Hard to read and really cheesy.
You dont know when to quit.
Im sick of reading this lame ass shit.
Your weak ass wackness is proportional to Michael Jackson's blackness.
Im like a Britians toothbrush.
Untouched.

I screwed this up and posted in the wrong spot. Sorry ill re post. Im used to going second so its hard for me to write first. This was sloppy and quick...

This is going to be a one sided battle.
Your in the boat but without a paddle.
You think your ghetto? Your not even fly.
Your lyrics are like mase IN MY GLASS EYE.
You arent so fresh, or so clean.
You sound like a little kid tryin to act mean.
The rhymes you slobber are like graffiti.
Hard to read and really cheesy.
You dont know when to quit.
Im sick of reading this lame ass shit.
Your weak ass wackness is proportional to Michael Jackson's blackness.
Im like a Britians toothbrush.
Untouched.


Sorry for duble.

this ur first battle but its gon be ur last,
im not gon rip u 2 hard so lets make dis fast/
u did tha wrong thing challengin me,
killin u so bad ur name says 41ztifpc/
if dont understand it means i put ur name backwards,
when im done beatin ya we can shake hand afterwards/
erbody from cali erased where they from,cause they like i aint rep tha same place as this bum/this is a 1 round ko,u should be locked like tony yayo,cause ur rhymes is wack jus like ur name,dont take it personal nbut this battle aint nuttin but a game

This was feedback posted for lilchiofthachi
 

Nice drop really feelin it
I liked ur structure punchlines and overall verse
TOO bad I cant vote yet but I will be sure to do it

Voted For: lilchiofthachi

this battle became personal for me when Cpfitz tried to tornt graffiti......firstly graff is part of hip hop which is what u r participating in now..... needless to say it is something i love and respect and the only reason u diddin it is prolly coz ya either cant do it, too stupid to be able to read it therefore cant appreciate or got beat up or shit on by a graff artist and have ya own personal beef.........

neways fuck that shit i think ya verse was wack either way. your punches were weak, and ya whole shit was just toy in my opinion. *nothin personal*

on the other hand 'lil' u posted a decent enough verse to get my vote. nothin special but i think ur shit hit harder therefore u get my vote.

Voted For: lilchiofthachi

... lil; ur structure was a lil bit betta than his but not great, couldn't see any decent punches from either but at least yours made sense, plus his flow was fucked, and yours was betta ...

Voted For: lilchiofthachi

what was this?

Voted For: CPFitz14

Vote: cp

Lyrics: tied
Opening: tied
ending: cp......gd MJ joke and toothbrush bit
Metas: cp...had more
Multies: neither
Personals: neither
Originality:cp.....mase in glass eye
Wordplay:lilchi...yayo...name backwards
Punchs: cp....most of his lines were aimed at lilchi were as lilchis lines were more rhymes than punches

Overall: decent battle...lilchi just needs more punches in his spit. Return tha favour wit honest votes!

Voted For: CPFitz14

flow-CPFitz14, better put together since lines were short except for the mj line that stood out

punches/personals-cpfitz14, both really lacked on this both gotta work on this a lot, lilchiofthachi, your punches made no sense, u wanna rip on CPFitz14s name? look at yours...
should atleast get a better name if your gonna rip on someone elses, punches lacked from both but CPFitz14s made more sense

the rest were basically none or tie, nothin big no hate

good luck peace

Voted For: CPFitz14

weak battle but gotta give it 2 CP no hate but y'all both need elevation so break down

punchez - CP (little harder then chi'z)
vocab - CP (had a couple wordz in there that i had 2 read over)
Flow - Chi (barz relative length)
Structure - CP (easier 2 read)

both pretty basic but i wuz feelin' CP'z more then Chi'z

Voted For: lilchiofthachi

yo you killed it you got him in every cat i like it you got skill lilchi i really like it

return the favor

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=151021 insane16 (up 2-0)

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=149715 Lil-Youngstah (up 2-0)